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time and location people involved injuries goods stolen information about robbers actions taken by police
MARKING PROCEDURE
C1
C2
C3 C4
C5
C6
time and location [ content points ] people involved injuries goods stolen information about robbers actions taken by police
Format
: 2 marks F1- title/ heading F2- Place Content : 13 marks Content + Elaborations Language : 20 marks
Total
: 35 marks
BRAINSTORMING IDEAS C6 C5
Format :
Tense :
C1
C2
C3
C4
Description of place
C3 & E3 Injuries
Serious / mild .Where / Which part ? Gunshot wounds/ stab wounds Blood flowing / cuts & bruises Where ? Shoulder, neck , chest ? Broken leg / hand /arm Fainted / unconscious
jewelleries
C5 & E5 Information about robbers Descriptions Size, weight, height, skin colour, hair, age Clothes e.g a black leather jacket with an eagle logo , tatoo on the arm , stocking masks, Weapons ? carrying revolvers etc
C6 & E6 Action taken by police Viewed the CCTV in the shop Fingerprints Blood samplings DNA Identification of weapons / bullets Road blocks major roads / highway / police dogs Pictures of robbers by police artist in newspapers Rakan Cop alert Call nearest police station Police informers
Appropriate Vocabulary
Robbery occurred / happened
Seized / ransacked Investigation / investigated
Firearm robbery
Modus operandi used in the robbery
Marks for Language A ( 19 20 ) Language is accurate. Varied sentence structures . Varied use of vocabulary with precision. Punctuations and spellings are accurate. Format and style are concise throughout. Paragraphs are unified and organised.
Marks for Language B ( 16 - 18 ) Language is almost accurate with minor errors Some variation in sentence structures . Varied use of vocabulary with some precision. Punctuations and spellings are almost accurate. Format and style are almost concise throughout. Paragraphs are almost unified.
Marks for Language C ( 13 15 ) Language is largely accurate. Simple sentence structures. Errors in sophisticated sentences.Repeated sentences. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Punctuations and spellings are generally accurate. Some with errors. Format and style are quite concise at times. Paragraphs are sometimes unified but without appropriate linkage.
Marks for Language D ( 10 - 12 ) Language is sufficiently accurate. Simple sentence structures ,patches of clarity. Adequate vocabulary but lacks precision. Punctuations and spellings generally accurate but with errors. Format and style are generally accurate throughout. Attempts to achieve unified paragraphs.
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A ( 44 50 ) Excellent B ( 38 43 ) Good C ( 32 37 ) Above Average D ( 26 31 ) Average E ( 20 25 ) Below Average U ( i ) (14 19 ) Weak U ( ii ) ( 8 13 ) Very Weak U ( iii )( 0 7 ) Critical