Dr Jaime Hunt Course Coordinator jaime.hunt@newcastle.edu.au 1 Outline for today Guest lecturer: Annette Morante, note-making in lectures Academic Language Grammar: Determiners and Nouns Recap and expand: What is language?
2 What is academic writing? Academic writing refers to a particular style of expression. 3 Using an informal writing style in an essay is like wearing shorts footy boots to a wedding
Informal writing is fine for diary entries, blogs, personal writing, letters or emails to friends. 4 Academic language Academic language Formal Concise and precise No abbreviations, slang or textspeak Specialised terminology Objective
5 Formal vs informal tone They promised to help me. The academic staff offered to assist in improving my writing skills.
It was, like, really good. The movie was outstanding. 6 Concise and Precise These sounds are acceptable in word initial position. In which language? English? Australian English?
One example is chien and dog. One example of what? Which languages?
7 Concise and precise: Delete unnecessary words Not good: An example of this problem is the fact that fever patients need increased rest and increased fluid intake.
Better: For example, fever patients need increased rest and increased fluids. Concise and precise: Delete unnecessary words in order to to at the present time now at this point in time now the reason why the reason for the reason that because in the even that if are of the opinion that believe consensus of opinion consensus
Concise and precise: Delete unnecessary words Avoid adjectives and adverbs: very quite rather some lots extremely, etc. e.g. Adjectives are an extremely exciting word class.
Avoid abbreviations, contractions* etc. = and so on e.g. = for example, for instance, some of these are dont, cant = do not, cannot
If in doubt, write it out
* unless in examples/direct quotes 11 Avoid slang or SMS terms guy man hang out meet yabber speak/talk u you 2moz tomorrow 12 Specialised terminology Some linguistic terms have a different meaning to everyday usage. semantics = meaning syntax = sentence formation lexicon = mental dictionary universal properties phatic communion
Note any new vocabulary and how it is used Use glossary for correct linguistic definitions 13 Objective vs. subjective Avoid I, we, in my opinion, I think, we believe, etc. I think that he is wrong. The evidence suggests that his conclusions are incorrect. In my opinion, the changes in the vocabulary of every language are very gradual. The changes in the vocabulary of every language appear gradual.
14 General hints Pay close attention to what you read. Note not just the content and ideas, but also the way the ideas are expressed. Note any repeated phrases, e.g. On one hand On the other hand, structure of paragraphs/whole texts, vocabulary
15 For more information see Chapter 12 (pp. 191-214) of:
Belmont, W. & Sharkey, S. (2009), The easy writer: Formal writing for academic purposes. Frenchs Forest: Pearson Education, Ch. 12, pp. 191-214
This book contains information and exercises, with answers at the back. 16 Grammar Definition Word Classes Determiners Nouns 17 What is grammar? Combining sounds into words Phonology Forming words Morphology Combining words into phrases and phrases into sentences Syntax Assigning meaning Semantics
18 What is grammar? Our linguistic competence = the internalised, unconscious set of rules that is part of every grammar of every language.
19 Something wrong here? 20 Your mental grammar instructs you that this is incorrect in English. Word Class Example Adjective big, green, happy Adverb happily, often, very Coordinator and, but, or Determiner article (the, a/an, some); demonstrative (this, that, these, those), possessive pronoun (my, your, his, her, its, our, their) Noun David, house, bag, Sydney Preposition along, by, on, for, of Pronoun I, he, them, her, my, itself Verb grow, sing, tell, eat 21 *Colour indicates major (open) classes. Word classes in a sentence 22 Subsets of determiners 23 Determiners Articles the, a/an Demonstrative pronouns this, that, these, those Some possessive pronouns my, his, her, our, your Determiners Before a noun Add specificity and definiteness to nouns Examples: Articles - a banana, an apple, the watermelon Demonstratives - this mandarin, that rockmelon, these grapes, those plums Possessive Pronouns- my cumquat, his mango, your orange, our fruit, her pineapple Can only have one det., e.g. *The a banana
24 Determiners not always used Names of languages and nationalities, e.g. Chinese, English, Spanish Names of sports, e.g. volleyball, hockey, baseball Names of academic subjects e.g. mathematics, biology, history
25 Nouns Generally convey the gist of a text. Remove a noun from a sentence and the meaning is difficult to follow e.g. The _____ ate all the _____. More than just naming words. Better to discuss them in terms of characteristics 26 Classes of nouns 27 Nouns Proper Nouns (Fred, London, Times) Common Nouns (book, information) Count (book, pen, desk) Noncount (mass) (sugar, advice) Concrete (computer, member) Abstract (idea, supposition) Concrete (butter, cake, beer) Abstract (kindness, idealism) Nouns May be after a determiner May have a different plural form Regular plural form: +s cakes, guinea pigs Irregular plural form: children, syllabi Some have no change in the plural The sheep is woolly. The sheep are woolly. (The verb is/are tells whether singular or plural)
28 Nouns Inflections (grammatical endings) Number (singular or plural, see above) Case Common case (no ending) Genitive case (s or s added to show ownership) The girls book (one girl, one book) The girls book (more than one girl, one book) The girls books (more than one girl, more than one book).
29 Nouns Derivational endings, e.g. -er/-or actor, painter, writer -ism/-tism criticism, egotism, vandalism -ment development, management -tion organisation, foundation
30 Examples of nouns a banana, an apple, the watermelon this mandarin, that rockmelon, these grapes, those plums my cumquat, his mango, your orange, our fruit, her pineapple
31 Identify the nouns and determiners 1. Grapes are sold by the bunch. 2. The brakes need to be inspected. 3. William wrote well. 4. The truck carried a lot of merchandise. 5. Take the red car to her office. 6. You are not suffering from an illness. 7. The bear caught a salmon in the stream. 8. John ate the lemon pie.
32 Identify the nouns and determiners nouns determiners 1. Grapes are sold by the bunch. 2. The brakes need to be inspected. 3. William wrote well. 4. The truck carried a lot of merchandise. 5. Take the red car to her office. 6. You are not suffering from an illness. 7. The bear caught a salmon in the stream. 8. John ate the lemon pie.
33 For more information, see Fromkin, V. et al. (2009). pp. 10-13 Crystal, D. (2004). Rediscover Grammar (3rd. ed.). Harlow, Essex: Pearson Education. Question 2 on page 27 of Fromkin, V. et al. (2009). Dont worry about being right, just ask yourself why.
34 What is Language? - Sociolinguistics What we do with language How we use language in communication
35 4 functions of Language 1. Informative 2. Phatic communion 3. Expressive 4. Directive
36 Informative function Information may be true or false Speaker or writer may be mistaken, lying or being exact Main point: an attempt is being made to provide information Turn right at the next set of lights and then it is on the corner of the next crossroads. I am five years old and in kindergarten at Cooks Hill Public School. I will have two glasses of chardonnay, please.
37 Phatic communion No attempt at exchanging facts, give info. Shows politeness and accepted attitude Empty of content Formalities, similar to smiling, waving, shaking hands Establishes/maintains social relationships Opens & closes conversations Formulaic, ritualised 38 Phatic communion Examples: How are you? Fine thanks. It was nice seeing you again Im pleased to meet you Dear Sir/Madam Yours truly/sincerely Mandarin Chinese: Have you eaten yet? Tongan - Where is your going directed to?
39 Expressive function Reveals feelings /attitudes of the writer /speaker, or of the subject Evokes feelings in the reader (or listener). the use of language that reveals feelings May be true expression of feelings or mere phatic communion, e.g. What a beautiful day!
40 Directive function Affects someone elses thoughts or behaviour Person does not need to carry out the directive May not be a question or command Has a scale of politeness
41 Directive function Examples: Pass the salt. Would you please pass the salt? Get the lights. Turn off the lights. Please turn off the lights. Kindly extinguish the illumination. 42 Directive function Indirect directives: Its cold in here Do you live in a tent? Are you trying to warm the world? What are you trying to achieve with these utterances? Knowing a language encoding and decoding messages (grammatical competence) Reading other peoples minds is also essential
43 Language Knowing a language encoding and decoding messages (grammatical competence) Reading other peoples minds is also essential 44 Further reading Finegan E., Blair, D. & Collins, P. (2002). Language its Structure and Use. Marrickville, N.S.W. : Harcourt, Brace & Co