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there is a missing uncertainty
All lab 2 measurements should have uncertainty
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the value precision doesnt match the first
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a statement is made without due support
there is a spelling mistache mistake
The Introduction is general Physics and may be
present tense, but the rest should be past tense
Every term or symbol should be defined EXPLICITLY
when it is introduced
units are missing or incorrect
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