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The key to
writing with clarity and
power
rain weather
debt leverage
money funds
compatible synergistic
l Familiar l Unfamiliar
l Profit l Retained earnings
l Storm l Weather event
l Skills l Career
l Central bank development
l Salary and benefits l Monetary authority
l Think l Remuneration
l Write l Cogitate
l Compose
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Business & Finance Writing Winter 2010 10
Homework
l Write a 200-word story on a financial topic of your
choice. Focus on using active verbs, nouns and
concrete language.
l The point is to see the link between word
choice and sentence structure. By relying on
active verbs and concrete language to convey
the information, we are forced to write clearer,
more effective sentences.
l Don’t worry about content, per se. You can
even make up the facts of the story, or take
them from an analyst report or data in a
newspaper or financial Web site. The point is
to choose theBusiness
right words and right structure. 11
& Finance Writing Winter 2010
Bankers versus Consultants
l Thin on background information.
l Reader forced to assume “consulting
fees” were, in fact, bribes and,
thus, had to be hidden from tax
officials and there’s no mention
that the “abandoned chemical
weapons in China” were left in
China by the Imperial Japanese
Army in 1945.
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l But in the days after the storms, consumers flocked to stores, enabling
retailers to recover some lost sales. In fact, post-storm shopping helped
the day after Christmas — which is typically the third-best performing
day of the season — ascend to the number No. 2 spot this year.
ShopperTrak said consumers spent $7.9 billion on Dec. 26, up from $7.8
billion last year. Sales the Saturday before Christmas, the third-biggest
day this season, were $6.9 billion
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The increase on the day after Christmas shows price cuts at retailers
were effective in boosting sales, a sign consumers are still willing and able
to spend for discounted merchandise.