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GTE Technical Writing Workshop

Carol Piedra & Esteban Solorzano

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Agenda

Why we do writer papers?


GTE Paper structure
Editing (Web Layout)
Captions for tables and figures
Raster vs Vector and Image
References (Zotero)
Information Sources
Breaking the ice with Mindmapping
Intellectual Property

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Why do we write papers?

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Create new knowledge and disseminate it.

Impact on reader:
An individual can pick up paper and glean any useful information with as little effort
as possible.
For another researcher in the field, a read of the abstract and a skim of the results
should be sufficient to grasp the paper.
For a non-expert, the introduction and discussion should fill in any gaps in their
knowledge (to a reasonable extent).

Help others from reinventing the wheel and foster collaboration.

Obtain critical reviews and feedback from around BSC.

Establish credentials: Make the world aware of what we are working on.

It's also fun!


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GTE Paper Structure

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I. BACKGROUND

II. BODY OF PAPER

III. TOOLS USED

IV. RESULTS

V. CONCLUSIONS

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Editing (Web Layout)

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Web Layout view allows to focus on the content of the paper, not in type
setting.

Type setting: Text formatting should be done last

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Paragraph Marks Icon

Allows to improve the available physic space in the worksheet

Document control while writing the paper

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Captions for tables and figures

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Each figure and table will be linked to their respective description

Numbering sequence in constant change automatic updates (F9)

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Raster vs Vector and Image

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Raster (Bitmap)

A raster image is defined by pixels. A pixel is the smallest display


element that makes up the images seen on a computer monitor or
television. In raster images, the more pixels an image contains, the
higher its resolution.
Raster images are the best choice for creating subtle gradations of
shades and color, such as in a photograph.

A raster image is resolution-dependant because it contains a fixed


number of pixels that are used to create the image.

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Vector (Lines/Calculated Points)

A vector image is defined by objects which are made of lines and curves
that are defined mathematically in the computer. Vectors can have
various attributes such as line thickness, length and color.
Vector graphics are resolution-independent because the vector objects
are drawn mathematically in the computer. They can be made larger or
smaller without any loss of quality to the image. Vectors can be printed
at any size, on any output device, at any resolution, without losing detail
and without altering the resolution of the image.

Vector images are the best choice for typefaces, charts and graphs,
drawings, and other graphics that must have sharp lines when scaled to
various sizes.
Even though word processing programs such as MSWord are not
drawing programs, they too use vectors because they use fonts and
fonts are vector files! Fireworks is unique in that it works with both raster
and vector art.

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Raster vs Vector

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Raster vs Vector Images

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Raster vs Vector

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Raster vs Vector

Raster Programs
Photoshop
Fireworks
Paint

Vector Programs
Illustrator
Flash
Inkscape open source software similar to Adobe Illustrator (Tiros favorite)

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Raster vs Vector

Raster file extensions


Png portable network graphic
Psd Photoshop document
Jpg joint photographic experts group
Gif graphics interchange format
Bmp Bitmap

Vector File Extensions


Ai Adobe Illustrator
Eps Encapsulated Postscript
Wmf Windows Metafile

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The Visual Display of Quantitative
Information

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Good graphics

Napoleans invasion of Russia, as drawn by Charles Joseph Minard


(1781-1870)
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More good graphics

The price of wheat compared to labour wages, William Playfair (1759-


1823)
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More good graphics

French train schedule, as drawn by E.J. Marey (1830-1904)


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More good graphics

Map of the northern


galactic hemisphere
(1.3 million galaxies
shown)

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What made these graphics good?

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Bad graphics

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More bad graphics

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More bad graphics

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What made these graphics bad?

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How can we make better
graphics?

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Edward Tuftes principles of data graphics

Above all else, show the data

Maximize the data-ink ratio

Erase non-data-ink

Erase redundant data-ink

Revise and edit


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Above all else, show the data

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Show the data

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Data-Ink

Ink that changes as the data changes

Non-redundant ink!
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Data-Ink Ratio

data-ink
Data-ink ratio
= Total ink used to print
graphic
= Proportion of a graphics
ink devoted to the non-
redundant display of
data-information.
= 1.0 proportion of
graphic that can be
erased without the loss of
information
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Ratio of Histogram

What is the data-ink ratio of this graphic?

<
0.05 !!!

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Ratio of USA Today Graphic

What is the data-ink ratio of this graphic?

<
0.001

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How can we make better graphics?

Tufte presents some principles of data graphics


Above all else, show the data.
Maximize the data-ink ratio
Within reason
Every bit of ink on a graphic requires a reason
Erase non-data-ink
Erase redundant data-ink
Revise and edit

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How can we make better graphics?

Tufte presents some principles of data graphics


Above all else, show the data.
Maximize the data-ink ratio
Erase non-data-ink
Erase redundant data-ink
Revise and edit

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Erase non-data-ink, within reason

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Erase non-data-ink, within reason

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Erase non-data-ink, within reason

Histogram of Midterm Results

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# of Students

11

2
1
0
C B- B B+ A- A
Scoring Buckets

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Erase redundant data-ink

Histogram of Midterm Results

18
# of Students

11

2
1
0
C B- B B+ A- A
Scoring Buckets

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Erase redundant data-ink

Histogram of Midterm Results

18
Whats the
data-ink
# of Students

11 ratio?
7

2
1
0
C B- B B+ A- A
Scoring Buckets

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How can we make better graphics?

Tufte presents some principles of data graphics


Above all else, show the data.
Maximize the data-ink ratio
Erase non-data-ink
Erase redundant data-ink
Revise and edit

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The Principles Applied to Common Forms

Box Plots

Maximum

75%

Media
n
25%

Minimum

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The Principles Applied to Common Forms

Box Plots

Maximum

75%

Media
n
25%

Minimum

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The Principles Applied to Common Forms

Bar Graphs
Modified
Graph
Original
Graph

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The Principles Applied to Common Forms

Scatter Plots
Modified
Graph

Original
Graph

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The Principles Applied to Common Forms

Another Scatter Plot Variant

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Conclusions

Show data variation, not design variation


Avoid using ink for non-data items
Avoid redundancy
Clear and detailed labeling should be used to
defeat graphical distortion
Revise and Edit

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Smart way to manage references

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the next-generation research tool

www.zotero.org
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works with...
most library catalogs

and hundreds of
other sites and
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databases...
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Information Sources

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Bibliographic References

BSC Intranet Resources Library and Knowledge Services

Library@bsci.com

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But Tiro! I cant think clearly on what to write!
(Psychological inertia)

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Breaking the ice with Mindmapping

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Why Mind Map?

Organize thoughts when brainstorming


Effective method of taking notes
Harnesses the full range of cortical skills word, image, number, logic, rhythm,
color and spatial awareness
Aid creativity, memory, and specifically the recall of information

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