Personal Essay Essay Mistakes Writer’s Prompt: • Describe your perfect day. • What are you doing? • What are you seeing? • Where are you? • What do you smell? • What do you see? • What are you feeling? • Write a paragraph describing your perfect day. Assignments • Read in GW “Wuthering Heights” by Emily Bronte’ Page 31 • Page 35, do questions Meaning and Idea #3; Language, Form, Structure #2 • Read LBH Chapter 2 and do Ex. 2.6, Page 31 Assignment Review • E.B. White “Once More to the Lake” • Meaning and Idea - #4 • Language, Form, Structure - #3, #4 • Read Little Brown Handbook (LBH) Chapter One • Narrow the subject • The Civil War • Teenage Drinking • The History of the Cell Phone • Environmentalism E. B. White • New Yorker magazine essayist • Language lover • Charlottes Web, Stuart Little • The Elements of Style Bouncing your brain. Some creative ways to get the writing process started To Begin… And, “Why not?” "Some men see things as they are and say 'Why?' I dream things that never were and say, 'Why not?'" George Bernard Shaw Welcome whimsy. Be foolish. Dream. Have a light bulb moment. Look at things differently. Look at both sides of the picture. Ways to Brain Bounce • Freewriting • Brainstorming • Ask critical questions • Keep a journal • Mindmapping • Daydreaming FREEWRITING Freewriting • “Freewriting” is like pouring all of your thoughts onto paper. • Don’t take your pen off the page; keep writing for the entire time. • If you don’t know what to write, write “I don’t know what to write” until you do. Freewriting • Set a timer for five to ten minutes • Look at the topic and think about it briefly • Now ready? Set? Write! Freewriting • Don't stop! Don’t edit! • Keep your fingers typing or your pen moving for your time limit • Don’t try to sort “good” and “bad” ideas. • Don’t worry about spelling and grammar. Exercise • Freewrite for 10 minutes on the word which will appear on the next slide. • Just go for it. • Don’t hold back blue BRAINSTORMING Brainstorming • “Brainstorming” means thinking of as many ideas as possible in a short amount of time. • Write down your ideas so that you don’t forget them. • Every idea is a good idea Brainstorming • Write down everything that comes to your mind; don’t worry about sorting out “good” and “bad” ideas. • Don’t worry about spelling or grammar Brainstorming • No stopping, no editing (similar to freewriting) • Note key words or short phrases in list form under your subject (instead of free- flowing paragraph) Example of Brainstorming Topic: What would I do with one million dollars? • Travel--Europe, Asia, S. America • Buy a house or two • Share--donate to charities • Get an expensive car • Invest/save and let the interest grow Exercise • For next few minutes, get into groups of two, three, or four and brainstorm the subject presented on the next slide. How would you solve the current economic crisis? MINDMAPPING Mindmapping • Start with a central word. • As related concepts pop in your head, indicate them as branches, arrows, bubbles, etc. • You may have an “aha!” moment. Delis World Series? Broadway Pricey Gang warfare
Cost of Food Law and Order
The Yankees New York Big Apple Hilary Clinton Vacation? Movies Far Away 911 Times Square Exercise • Mindmap the topic on the next slide. The Senior Prom JOURNAL WRITING Keep a Journal Journal Writing • Why is this important to me? • How does it relate to me? • How do I feel about it? • Do I feel good/bad/indifferent about it? Why? Journal Writing • How does this affect me daily? • How might my connection to this change in the future? • How did I feel about this in the past? ASK CRITICAL QUESTIONS Ask • Dictionary definition of _____? • How is the _____ different from other things? • What are some concrete examples of the _____?
Sleepwalking COMPARE AND CONTRAST Compare/Contrast
• What is _____ similar to?
• What is _____ different
from?
• Is _____ most unlike (like)
what? Sleepwalking OUTLINING Outlining • “Outlining” is a more organized form of pre-writing than the others we discussed. • It can be used after you have generated ideas through brainstorming, free writing, or other pre-writing techniques. • It works well for structured types of writing such as essays. Example Outline I. Introduction: Eating sushi has its advantages and disadvantages II. Advantages a) easy to cook – none required b) fun to do with friends and family III. Disadvantages a) hard to find sushi restaurants b) sushi is expensive CHARTING Charting • Sometimes you will want to organize your ideas for writing in a chart. • Charting works very well for comparison/ contrast writing or examining advantages and disadvantages. Owning A Cat Good Bad
Good Shedding company
Easy to Litter Box
care for Exercise
• Draw a chart to organize your ideas about the
following topic: • Compare the similarities and differences between Troy and St. Louis. More ways to get your brain bouncing… Act silly. Think outside the lines. Change your focus…
When is a pencil not a pencil?
How many legs does the elephant have? Monroe or Einstein? Young lady, old man or man? Before an artist named Eric paints the side of this building… And after. Before: the blank hallways of a large manufacturer… And after. Think about it… Hard work pays off in the future. Laziness pays off now. Stephen Wright I intend to live forever – so far, so good. Stephen Wright What happens if you get scared half to death twice? Stephen Wright I used to have an open mind but my brains kept falling out. Stephen Wright Take a trip in your mind… Listen to music… And after everything,