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The difference between my father and my

mother. = not a sentence

The differences between my father and my
mother (among my parents) are various (a lot
in number, numerous, etc.).
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First, my mother height 155 cm., she is quite
short.

First, my mother is quite short. She is only 155
centimetres tall.
My mothers height is 155 centimetres.
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My father and mother they are like night and day
in many ways.
()


day and night / night and day = all the time


My father and mother (parents) are very much
different from each other.
My father is a far cry from my mother in
numerous ways.
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My father is a couch potato the cause of this is he
seldom spends time on household chores only watch
TV all day but my mother is the most industrious
woman that I have ever seen. = Run-on sentence



My father is a couch potato. The cause of this is he
seldom spends time on household chores. He only
watches TV all day. Unlike my father, my mother is
industrious. She is ..
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A year ago, I had started studying in the major
of English.

A year ago, I started studying English.
A year ago, I started studying English as a
major subject.
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After I spent for a year and realized how
importance of English is, I studied and
improved all of English skills.

After I spent one year here and realized the
importance of English, I started studying it
earnestly and have improved a lot since then.
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I at present and I in 5 years ago differ in the way I
spend my life.

The way I spend my life now differs greatly from
the way I did five years ago.
ago
5 years ago, one month ago, long ago, etc.
in 5 years ago
Preposition
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I almost make every decision by myself.
Almost = nearly
Almost make = nearly make =


Mostly, I make decisions on my own.
I make most of the decisions on my own (by
myself).
I make almost all the decisions by myself.
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My mom is 48 years old, my dad is 56 years
Compound sentence
old. =

My mother is 48 years old, but my father is 56
years old.
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My dad is teacher and he has a duty teach
children at school.
My mom is housewives and she have to clean
the house.

My father is a primary school teacher.
My mom is a housewife and she has to clean
the house.
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I now and I was five years ago are different in
several ways.

I am now and I was five years ago are different
in several ways.
There are several different things in me now
and five years ago.
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My father and my mother are different in
several ways. First, my father is a farmer.
However, my mother is a teacher and she
teaches at high school.

The first difference between them is a career.
My father is a farmer. He.. My mother is a
teacher. She teachesat a high school.
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Today and a year ago, there are several
differences that things have changed.

Over a year, several different things have
changed to me. First, .
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On the contrary, my mother is kind, and she
likes to give me consult when I get into
trouble.

On the contrary, my mother is kind and
sympathetic. Whenever I get into trouble, she
is always ready there to give me a sympathetic
ear.