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NADEEM AHMED
Assistant Professor
Mohammad Ali Jinnah University,
Karachi.
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The Writing Process
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Improving content and
sentence structure
Revising May involve adding,
cutting, and recasting.
Correcting grammar,
Proofreading spelling, punctuation,
format, and mechanics
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Memo Revised for Conciseness
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Concise Wording
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Limit Long Lead-Ins
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Remove Redundant Words
Avoid unnecessarily repetitious words. What
words could be omitted in these expressions?
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Dump Trite Expressions
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Jargon
Avoid technical terms and special terminology
that readers would not recognize.
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Slang
"I've had enough of your crap." (lies)
That restaurant was a real barf-out. "If you keep acting so dorky, you'll
(a displeasing place). never get a girlfriend!" (strange;
I met many amigos at Lever peculiar)
Brothers. (friends). "That's really cool, dude!" (male)
"Help! We're completely out of "Dave gave a dynamite
ammunition!" (toilet paper) presentation." (powerful; excellent)
"I was hoping to get my homework "Bill Gates is kind of a geek."
completed, but it's no biggie. " (sth (someone who works too hard, is more
intelligent than usual, and is slightly
important) unattractive )
"I made a booboo on the last "There must be a glitch in this
question of the exam." (a mistake)
softwware." (flaw)
"I'm completely bushed." "This project is causing me to go
(completely tired) bananas!" (go slightly mad)
"Why are you wearing such cheesy
"It took a lot of guts to ask his boss
clothes?" (cheap; outmoded)
for a raise." (courage)
“Pantene is totally cool!" (excellent;
"I paid $10,000 for my computer.
superb ) What a rip off!" (fraud)
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Clichés
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Clichés
above board - honest save your bacon - to save from
across the board - all or everything injury or loss (material, reputation,
sweep the board - win everything etc)
amateur - non-professional or un- my bad/it's my bad - "It's my
paid fault/mistake"
apple of his eye/apple of your battle of the bulge - diet/lose weight
eye/apple of my eye - a person
much adored or doted on get out of the wrong side of the
apple-pie bed - practical joke bed - be in a bad mood
(don't) throw the baby out with the bedlam - chaos
bath water - lose a good opportunity bite the bullet - do or decide to do
as part of a bigger clear-out
something very difficult
take a back seat - have little or only
observational involvement in to have kissed the Blarney Stone -
something possessing great persuasive ability
bring home the bacon - achieve a brass neck/brass-neck/brass
challenge, bring back the prize or necked - boldness or
earn a living impudence/audacious, rude
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Revise the following sentences to avoid
redundancies, trite business expressions,
jargon, and slang.
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Revise the following sentences to avoid
redundancies, trite business expressions,
jargon, and slang.
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Buried Verbs
Excessive Businesslike
The manager is actually The manager is
quite pleased with your pleased with your
proposal because the proposal because
plan is definitely
the plan is
workable.
workable.
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Precise Words
Revise your writing to include precise words.
Strive for specific verbs, concrete nouns, and
vivid adjectives. Beware of unclear pronouns.
you.
Quick
definitely would contact promised to e-mail
(telephone or fax)
Check
you.
We must give We must
encouragement to our encourage our
team. team.
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In the following sentences, unbury verbs and
control exuberance.
Headings
Short paragraphs
Ragged-right margins
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Designing Documents for
Readability
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Designing Documents for
Readability
Use a numbered list for instructions.
Instead of this Try this
To clean the printer, you To clean the printer, do
should do the following. the following:
First, you should
1. Disconnect the power
disconnect the power
cord.
cord. Then you open the
front cover, and the 2. Open the front cover.
printer area should be 3. Clean the printer with
cleaned with a soft cloth. a soft cloth.
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Designing Documents for
Readability
Organize information with column headings.
Instead of this Try this
On April 3 we will be in Date City Speaker
Toledo, and the speaker is
Troy Lee. On May 20 we April 3 Toledo Troy
will be in Detroit, and the Lee
speaker is Sue Wu. May 20 Detroit Sue Wu
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Designing Documents for
Readability
Use letters to list items within sentences.
Strive for parallelism.
Spelling
Grammar
Punctuation
Names and numbers
Format
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Proofreading Marks
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How to Proofread
Complex Documents
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How to Proofread
Complex Documents
For documents that must be perfect:
Have someone read aloud the original while
someone else checks the printout.
Spell names.
Spell difficult words.
Note capitalization.
Note punctuation.
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