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THE NOUN OR NOUN PHRASE THAT WOULD BE THE OBJECT OF AN ACTIVE SENTENCE APPEARS
AS THE SUBJECT OF A SENTENCE WITH PASSIVE VOICE.
THE USE OF THE ENGLISH PASSIVE VOICE VARIES WITH WRITING STYLE AND FIELD.
SOME PUBLICATIONS' STYLE SHEETS DISCOURAGE USE OF THE PASSIVE VOICE, WHILE OTHERS
ENCOURAGE IT.
THE PASSIVE IS PRESENT FOR A REASON IN WRITING PAPER, HOWEVER, AND ITS PRESENT IS
NOT ALWAYS TO BE DESPISED.
THE PASSIVE VOICE IS ESPECIALLY HELPFUL (AND EVEN REGARDED AS MANDATORY) IN SCIENTIFIC
OR TECHNICAL WRITING OR LAB REPORTS, WHERE THE ACTOR IS NOT REALLY IMPORTANT BUT THE
PROCESS OR PRINCIPLE BEING DESCRIBED IS OF ULTIMATE IMPORTANCE.
THE PASSIVE IS PARTICULARLY USEFULL (EVEN RECOMMENDED) IN TWO SITUATIONS:
1. IF THE ACTION IS MORE IMPORTANT THEN THE AGENT.
o DUMAI MARINE SCIENCE STATION WAS BUILT IN 1990 (THE IMPORTANT
THING WAS WHAT HAPPENED, NO MATTER WHO DID IT)
o THE FISHING BOATS WERE MADE IN THE LAST TWO DECADES. THEY ARE STILL
IN OPERATION PRESENTLY. (WE DIDN'T KNOW WHO MADE THEM).
2. IF THE AGENT IS NOT KNOWN :THE TRAWL WAS SENT TO RONALD (SOMEONE SENT HIM A
SET OF TRAWL
o THE BOAT WAS BROKEN (NO ONE KNOW WHO DID IT)
o A SET BUT WE DID NOT KNOW WHO HE/SHE IS)
3. IF THE AGENT IS IRRELEVANT:
o AN CONSERVATION ZONE WILL BE DEVELOPED IN THE SOUTH BINTAN
WATERS. THE PLAN HAS BEEN SOCIALIZED SINCE 3 YEARS AGO ( WE ARE NOT
INTERESTED IN WHO OR THE AGENT).
4. NOTE!!!, IT IS POSSIBLE TO STATE THE AGENT USING PREPOSISTION “BY”
o RONALD WAS GIVEN A SET OF TRAWL BY IRWANDI OR
o RONALD WAS GIVEN BY IRWANDI, A SET OF TRAWL.
o A SET OF TRAWL WAS GIVEN TO RONALD BY IRWANDY.
4. YOU WANT TO BE VAGUE ABOUT WHO IS RESPONSIBLE:
o MISTAKES WERE MADE AND THE CREW WAS BURNED AT ILLEGAL FISHING OPERATION
[COMMON IN BUREAUCRATIC WRITING! NO ONE WANTED TO BE RESPONSIBLE]
o THE HARD DECISION HAD BEEN ISSUED BY THE COMMITEE (THE PERSON OR THE LEADER OF
THE COMMITEE AVOIDS HIS/HER RESPONSIBILITY ON THAT HARD DECISION)
5. YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT A GENERAL TRUTH:
o RULES ARE MADE TO BE BROKEN. [BY WHOMEVER, WHENEVER.]
o TRAWL OPERATION IS PROHIBITED IN INDONESIAN WATERS (BY LAW, GOVERNMENT
AGENCY).
6. YOU WANT TO EMPHASIZE THE PERSON OR THING ACTED ON.
o TRAP NET IS COMMONLY USED BY FISHERMEN IN THIS COASTAL AREA, EVEN ITS CATCH
TENDS TO BE DECLINED.
o INSULIN WAS FIRST DISCOVERED IN 1921 BY RESEARCHERS AT THE UNIVERSITY OF
TORONTO. IT IS STILL THE ONLY TREATMENT AVAILABLE FOR DIABETES.
7. YOU ARE WRITING IN A SCIENTIFIC GENRE THAT TRADITIONALLY RELIES ON PASSIVE VOICE.
PASSIVE VOICE IS OFTEN PREFERRED IN LAB REPORTS AND SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH PAPERS, MOST
NOTABLY IN THE MATERIALS AND METHODS SECTION:
o WATER SAMPLE WAS TAKEN WITH NISKIN BOTTLE. ITS SALINITY WAS MEASURED WITH
REFRACTOMETER ON BOARD.
o ECHOSOUNDER WAS USED TO DETECT THE FISH SCOOLING, THEN A PURSE SEIN WAS SET UP
ENCIRCLING THE AREA WITH A BOAT . THE PURSE SEIN WAS HAULED AFTER THE FIRST MAIN
FLOAT WAS MET. ITS CATCH WAS SORTED ON BOARD AND PUT INTO STORAGE UNDER THE
FRONT DECK.
WHEN WRITING A SENTENCE THAT CAN BE VAGUE ABOUT WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THE ACTION.
o BOTH RONALD AND IRWANDI SYOFYAN KNOW POLARIS VERY WELL. THUS, HE IS PERMITTED
o BOTH RONALD AND IRWANDI SYOFIAN LIKE POLARIS. THUS, THEY/ BOTH OF THEM PERMIT
ACADEMIC WRITING OFTEN DISCUSS THE DIFFERENCES OF YOUR IDEA WITH OTHER RESEARCHERS OR
BETWEEN THE IDEAS OF DIFFERENT RESEARCHERS:
o RESEARCH HAS BEEN DONE TO DISCREDIT THE OLD PERFORMANCE OF THE TRAWL
OPERASION IN THE FIELD. (WHO DID THE RESEARCH? YOU? YOUR PROFESSOR? ANOTHER
AUTHOR?).
o THE OLD PERFORMANCE OF THE TRAWL OPERATION IN THE FIELD HAS BEEN DISCREDITED BY
THIS RESEARCH. (RECOMMENDED/ MORE IMPACT AND CLEARER.).
SOME STUDENTS USE PASSIVE SENTENCES TO HIDE HIS LACK OF REFERRENCE IN THEIR RESEARCH:
o THE TRAWL WAS FIRST OPERATED IN THE EIGHTEENTH CENTURY IN TANJUNG PINANG
WATERS. (I COULDN’T FIND OUT WHO OPERATED THE TRAWL IN THE FIRST TIME! IN TANJUNG
PINANG. YOU SHOULD PROVED IT WITH REFERENCE).
PASSIVE SENTENCES SOUND WORDY AND INDIRECT. THEY CAN MAKE THE READER HARD TO
UNDERSTAND. AND THEY ARE USUALLY LONGGER THAN ACTIVE SENTENCES.
o SINCE THE BOAT WAS BEING NAVIGATED BY POLARIS AT THE TIME OF ACCIDENT, THE
DAMAGES HAS TO BE PAID BY HIM.
o RECOMMENDED SENTENCE:
POLARIS NAVIGATED THE BOAT AT THE TIME OF ACCIDENT. THUS, HE HAS TO PAY THE
DAMAGES.
PASSIVE VOICE IS FORMED WITH VERB TO BE + PAST PARTICIPLE
FUTURE PERFECT THE BOAT/S WILL HAVE BEEN WILL HAVE BEEN REPAIRED.
PRESENT
THE BOAT/S IS BEING ARE BEING REPAIRED.
PROGRESSIVE
IMPERSONAL FORM AND FORMAL STYLE: IN A LESS FORMAL, ACTIVE IVOICE IS MORE USUAL
o ENGLISH IS SPOKEN IN THIS ENGLISH CLUB. o WE SPEAK ENGLISH IN THIS ENGLISH CLUB.
o CREWS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO SMOKE IN o YOU DO NOT ALLOW TO SMOKE IN THIS
THIS ENGINE ROOM. ENGINE ROOM.
o THE CHOKE MUST BE PULLED BEFOR THE o YOU MUST PULL THE CHOKE BEFOR
ENGINE START. STARTING THE ENGINE.
INFINITIF PHRASE & PASSIVE GERUNDS