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BY:
1. M. SYAHRUL MAULIDIN(17420081)
2. SITI KLIYANI (17420084)
3. ERVA RISWALASTIKA (17420005)
4. MUHAMMAD GHANARO (17420172)
WHAT IS ESSAY OUTLINING?
Body:
Topic Sentence 1:Downloading music for free is a legal
issue.
Supporting detail:
1. Theft is taking something from someone who is the
rightful owner without their permission.
2. Artists own the rights to their own
music.
3. Music is under copyright + Music is
intellectual property, and taking it
without permission should be
considered a criminal act - despite the
fact that "everyone is doing it.“
Topic Sentence 2: Downloading music for free is an ethical
issue.
Supporting detail:
1. Principles of morality, i.e. what is right and what is wrong.
2. There is no difference between taking the music for free off
the internet and taking it for free out of a store.
3. Intellectual property = Intangible. This should be treated the
same way as tangible property, i.e. something physical that
you can touch.
Topic Sentence 3: Downloading music for free results in a loss
of income.
Suporting Detail:
1. Musicians love making music → but if people download their
music for free, simply because they can → music won’t be a
good, stable source of income Record companies will also lose
money. Record companies have a very positive role to play:
they scout for new talent + offer training and production
studios for up-and-coming musicians + they provide valuable
marketing services, making sure that new artists get heard.
2. Therefore many jobs related to the music industry will be
affected.
3. Talent will be underdeveloped → so, downloading music
without permission will lead to fewer good musicians → not only
bad for the musicians, but also for general public → we’ll have
less good music to listen to.
A Step-by-Step Process for Writing an Essay:
1. Source
2. Analyze some well-written essays.
3. Brainstorm your own ideas
4. Pick your thesis statement
5. Plan your essay
6. Write the body of your essay
7. Come up with a compelling title and introduction.
8. Conclude your essay
Conclusion:
Just because it’s easy and everyone is doing it,
downloading music for free is wrong both ethically and
morally, and deprives both the artist and the recording
companies of income.