Connotation game

“Once upon a time”

 PLTS:
Creative
thinker
Independent
Once upon a time
enquirer

L/O
1. Develop our critical response to the
written word.
2. Show empathy for the speaker in a poem

Creative response
Empathy
  or  or
Creative thinkers…
• generate ideas and explore
possibilities
• ask questions to extend their
thinking
• connect own and others’ ideas
and experiences in inventive ways
• question own and others’
assumptions
• try out alternatives or new
solutions and follow ideas through
• adapt ideas as circumstances
change
Independent enquirers…
• identify questions to answer and
problems to resolve
• explore issues, events or problems
from different perspectives
• analyse and evaluate information,
judging its relevance and value
• consider the influence of
circumstances, beliefs and feelings
on decisions and
events
• support conclusions, using reasoned
arguments and evidence
 Two questions to think about…
Is it better to be kind or truthful? What’s the
difference?

Have you ever considered yourself to be

two-faced?
 Once Upon a Time
Once upon a time, son,
They used to laugh with their hearts
And laugh with their eyes:
Ha But now they only laugh with their teeth,
Search behind my shadow.
There was a time indeed
They used to shake hands with their hearts:
But that’s gone, son.
Now they shake hands without hearts
While they left hands search
My empty pockets.
‘Feel at home’! ‘Come again’:
They say, and when I come
Again and feel
At home, once, twice,
There will be no thrice –
For then I fond doors shut on me.
So I have learned many things, son.
I have learned to wear many faces
Like dresses – homeface,
Officeface, streetface, hostface,
Cocktailface, with all their conforming smiles
Like a fixed portrait smile.
And I have learned too
To laugh with only my teeth
And shake hands without my heart.
I have also learned to say, ‘goodbye’,
When I mean ‘Good-riddance’:
To say ‘Glad to meet you’,
Without being glad; and to say ‘It’s been
Nice talking to you’, after being bored.
But believe me, son.
I want to be what I used to be
When I was like you. I want
To unlearn all these muting things.
Most of all, I want to relearn
How to laugh, for my laugh in the mirror
Shows only my teeth like a snake’s bare
Fangs!
So show me, son,
How to laugh; show me how
I used to laugh and smile
Once upon a time when I was like you.
Gabriel Okara
 Poetry explosion:10 minutes
5 Ws and a H
 Who is the poem
about?
 What happens in the
poem?
 Where is it set?
 When is it set?
 Why do you think
Gabriel Okara wrote
the poem?
 How does the poem
make you feel?
Storyboard the main images in
the poem: What is the story?
 Plenary:
• Compare notes
• Share with a partner

• Have you met the L/O?

• Set yourself a realistic target for next
lesson..how can you challenge yourself?
 PLTS:
Creative
thinker
Independent
Once upon a time
enquirer

L/O
1. Develop a critical and then creative
response to the written word.
2. Show empathy for the speaker in a
poem(TODAY)
Creative response
Empathy
 Starter: On your MWB
What is the poet’s message?
What is empathy?
How can we empathise with the speaker?
 Analysing a poem

Structure
Meaning
Imagery
Language
Effect on reader

Spend 3 minutes adding notes to each piece

of sugar paper.
 Smile help!
Structure:
length of the verse.

Mood / Tone:
the mood of the poem and emotions developed.

Imagery / Ideas:
similes, metaphors, personification, enjambment, pathetic fallacy.

Language:
rhythm / rhyme, repetition, rhetorical questions, alliteration, onomatopoeia,
enjambment, oxymoron

Effect:
the effect on the reader-thoughts and feelings
 Plenary
1.Develop a critical response to a poem
2.Show empathy with the speaker
3.Develop a creative response to the written
word

Have you met L/O 1 and 2?

WWW?
EBI?
 L/O
1.Develop a critical response to a poem
2.Show empathy with the speaker
3.Develop a creative response to the written
word (TODAY)
 Starter:
Write as many synonyms as you can for:
1.Polite
2.Mean
3.Rude
4.Nice
 PLTS:
Creative
thinker
Independent
Once upon a time
enquirer

L/O:
Develop a creative response to the written
word (TODAY)

Creative response
 How can we be successful as
creative writers?
• Create a checklist of success criteria in
pairs on your MWB.
• Use your APP sheet to help you
 Creative writing
• Could you use your favourite line as
inspiration for a piece of narrative writing?
• Could you use the speaker in this poem as
a main character in a story?

• Discuss with your partner.

 Taking inspiration from the
poem
• Choose your favourite line from the poem.

• Why do you like it?

• Create a mind map of ideas
• Plan independently.
• You need to be ready to write your story
next lesson…enjoy!
1. Develop a critical and then creative
response to the written word.

2. Show empathy for the speaker in a poem

Review your PLTS sheet