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Oshima, A. & Hogue. (2007). Introduction to
Academic Writing: Level 3 (3d edition). New
York: Pearson Education.
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
Organization
In a process paragraph, you explain how to make
or do something, so process paragraphs are
also called how-to paragraphs.
To explain how to do something clearly, break
the process into a series of steps and explain
each step.
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
The model paragraph on page 95 explains the process of
building a campfire. As you read it, count the number of
steps. Also, notice the words and phrases that introduce
each step.
Questions on the model.
1. Underline the topic sentence. What words tell the reader
that the paragraph will explain the process?
2. How many steps are there?
3. Does the concluding sentence summarize the steps, or does
it restate the topic sentence in different way?
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
A process paragraph begins with a topic
sentence that names the topic and tells the
reader to look for a process or procedure. Use
words such as steps, procedure, directions,
suggestions, and instructions.
You can teach your dog to fetch in a very short
time by following this procedure.
Making a pizza is easy if you follow these
instructions.
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
The supporting sentences are the steps and details
about each steps.
When your dog brings back the stick, praise him extravagantly.
The first step is to gather the ingredients you will need.
The concluding sentence can be the last step, or it can give the
results.
At the end of the lesson, give your dog a nice treat for a job well
done.
Now sit down and enjoy your delicious pizza.
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
Practice
Work with partner or with a small group. Write a
topic sentence for the following topics.
• how to register for classes at your school
• how to meet people in a new place
• how to get a job of your dreams
• how to prepare for a job interview
• how to live on a tight budget
• how to make ceviche, suchi, satay, etc.
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
Time order
In a process paragraph, you arrange the steps in order
by time and use time order signals to guide your
reader from step to step. You are already familiar
with time order signals from Chapter 2. Here are the
others.
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
Time order signals (sentence connectors)
First, (second, etc.)
Then (no comma)
Now (no comma)
Next,
Finally,
After that,
Meanwhile,
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Time order signals (others)
The first step … (no comma)
The next step … (no comma)
The final step … (no comma)
After five minutes,
After you take the pizza out of the oven,
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
Sentence Structure
Read the model text on page 99 How to Give the
Cat a Pill.
Questions to the model:
1. Look at sentence 3. What is the verb? What kind of sentence
is it – simple or compound?
2. Find other simple sentences that are commands. How many
can you find?
3. Look at sentence 8. How many SV combinations does it
contain? What words connects them?
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
In previous chapters, you learned about simple
sentences and compound sentences. In this
chapter, you will study a third kind of sentence,
called a complex sentence.
Clauses
A clause is a group of words that contains at least
one subject and one verb.
Anna left the party early.
… because she was tired.
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
There are two kinds of clauses in English:
independent and dependent. An
independent clause can be a sentence by
itself. Independent clause is another name
for simple sentence.
Anna left the party early.
Hold the cat’s mouth closed.
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
A dependent clause, in contrast, cannot be a
sentence by itself because its meaning is not
complete. A dependent clause depends on
something else to complete its meaning.
…because she was tired
… while you count to ten.
A complex sentence is a combination of one
independent clause and one (or more) dependent
clause(s).
Chapter 6. Process Paragraphs
Writing assignment
Choose one of the topics below:
• how to find/choose a marriage partner.
• how to lose 10 pounds in two days
• how to grow a houseplant
• how to drive a teacher crazy
• describe a wedding or other important ceremony
• explain the steps of educational system of Taiwan
Chapter 7. Comparison/ Contrast
Paragraphs
Organization
Comparison and contrast is a technique that we use every day.
For example, we compare and contrast courses and teachers
when we decide which classes to take. We compare and
contrast products and prices when we shop. When we
compare two or more things, we tell what is similar between
them when we contrast things, we tell what is different abort
them. Usually, we emphasize the differences, but sometimes
the paragraph describes both similarities and differences.
Chapter 7. Comparison/ Contrast
Paragraphs
Organization
Block Organization
In block organization, you group all the
similarities together in one block and all the
differences together in one block.
all similarities
all differences
Chapter 7. Comparison/ Contrast
Paragraphs
Point-to-point Organization
In point-to-point organization, you write about similarities and
differences by subtopics. For example, if you comparing and
contrasting several wireless telephone plans, you might
compare them on these subtopics.
cost of telephone (similarities and differences)
monthly rate (similarities and differences)
length of contract (similarities and differences)
reliability of service (similarities and differences)
Chapter 7. Comparison/ Contrast
Paragraphs
Examples:
ikebana and bonsai (Japan)
la passeggiata (Italy)
Dia de los Muertos and Las Posadas (Mexico)
Stammtish (Germany)
samovar (Russia)
Chapter 7. Definition Paragraphs
Comma rule (1)
Use commas to separate an extra information adjective clause
from the rest of the sentence. Do not use commas with
necessary adjective clauses.
Every culture in the world has special days that people observe
with traditional food, customs, and events.
In that sentence, the clause that people observe with traditional
food, customs, and events is and adjective clause modifying
the noun days. Since it is necessary to identify which days the
writer is discussing, the clause is necessary and commas are
not used. That always introduces a necessary clause.
Chapter 7. Definition Paragraphs
Comma rule (2)
Another example of a modern holiday with
pagan origins is Halloween, which is on
October 31.
In this sentence, the clause which is on October 31 is an
adjective clause modifying the noun Halloween. The
clause is unnecessary to identify Halloween; it
merely give s extra information about it. Therefore,
commas are used. Which, who, and whom introduce
extra information clauses.
Chapter 7. Definition Paragraphs
Practice
From the following lost of English slang words and phrases,
choose five and write definitions for them your definitions
should include at least one complex sentence, containing an
adjective clause. Look in a dictionary if you need help.