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Independent Independent Independent
Clause
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A comma splice (sometimes called a comma fault or
a run-on sentence) occurs when two sentences (or
independent clauses) are sliced together with only a
comma, a relatively weak mark of punctuation.
Example:
It is nearly half past five, so we cannot reach town
before dark.
Rule: If there are more than two independent
clauses in a series, separate the final two
independent clauses with a comma and a
coordinating conjunction.
Note that independent clauses other than the final
two are separated with commas.
e.g.: I am a woman, I am a truck driver, It is nearly
half past five, so we cannot reach town before dark.
Rule: Identify the independent clauses.
Separate those two or more independent clauses
with a semi-colon. This maintains the connection
between the clauses while ensuring a pause between
the two ideas
Example:
It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town
before dark.
It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.
Example:
Since it is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town
before dark.
The most common comma splice error is the
conjunctive adverb comma splice.
Example:
My car broke down, I need to buy a new one.
(incorrect)
My car broke down; therefore, I need to buy a new
one. (Correct)
Exception: Short, closely related independent
clauses in a sequence can be joined by a comma
only.
Example: I came, I saw, I conquered.
Example:
My car broke down I need to buy a new one.(Run-on
sentence)
My car broke down. I need to buy a new one.
My car broke down; I need to buy a new one.
My car broke down, so I need to buy a new one.
My car broke down; therefore I need to buy a new
one.
Look at the following sentence.
I saw a teacher who cares.
The author may have wanted to write
I saw a teacher. Who cares?
Using periods (and other forms of punctuation) and
knowing when to end a sentence are very
important. If you don't end a sentence
appropriately, the intended meaning can be changed,
or it can be misunderstood. Sometimes the meaning
is simply incomprehensible.
There are even more ways to fix run-on sentences,
depending on the relationship between the different
clauses; for example, you could use a colon if the
first clause introduces the second clause.
Example:
There was only one possible explanation: the train
had never arrived.
Judy leads a charmed life she never seems to have a
serious accident.
The airport is about to shut down because of the snow
and if the plane doesn't land soon it will have to go on
to Boston.
The show begins at 7:30 make sure you're there before
7:15.
Marcellino always knew his way around the woods this
is something he could always depend on.
Throughout history money and religion were closely
linked there was little distinction between government
and religion.