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Understanding SBA
Session 6 Unit 2
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Paragraph Structure
• An adequate, well-developed body
paragraph of a discussion essay
should have the following four parts:
Topic Sentence Citation as
(Claim) Support
Elaboration of Commentary
the Claim on the Citation
Weaving in the Citation
• When we use a citation, we have to
carefully think about how this use
could be meaningful.
Weaving in the Citation
Common ones:
• According to Patel (2008), …
• Patel (2008) states that…
Reference Reminder Language
• Variations:
Reference Reminder Language
• Read Paragraph D (on washback
effects) again.
• Find out the reference reminder
language in that paragraph.
Signaling Transition
Conjunction
is used
when there
is a change
of focus.
Achieving Smooth Transition
• An important strategy to achieve a
good flow of ideas is to follow the
‘known-new principle’.
Achieving Smooth Transition
• This ‘known-new principle’ governs
the arrangement of information in a
sentence.
Subject Verb Object
Predicate
Subject Predicate
Academic qualifications are required in many professions.
Graduating from a university gives people more choices when it
comes to choosing a job.
Known-new Principle
• When you begin a new sentence:
Predicate
Subject
Add new
information
Start with in the rest of
known the sentence
information
Known-new Principle
• Between (a) and (b), which one should you
choose?
Known-new Principle
• Read the two versions of the same
text on the Session notes.
• Underline all the subjects.
• Identify which version follows the
‘known-new principle’.
• Version B closely follows the ‘known-new’ principle.
Known-new Principle
• The ‘known-new principle’ can be achieved by:
1. Using a pronoun to refer to something in the
earlier sentence
2. …
Use of Pronouns
• Pronouns such as this or these are
often used in academic writing to
refer back (and sometimes forward)
to something which has been
mentioned already.
• They help relate sentences to one
another.
Use of Pronouns
This/That It/These
• Used to refer to • Used to refer to
verb phrases nouns/noun phrases
c/d & e
b
c&e
c/d
Achieving Smooth Transition
• Read the three short paragraphs on
your Session notes.
• All of these paragraphs are not very
cohesive.
• Rewrite them to improve the flow.
• Pay attention to the order of old and
new information.
• Add a conjunction when there is a
change of focus.
The hotel, which is one of the most well-known hotels in
the country, wanted to enhance its international
reputation by hosting the latest international dancing
competition. Although the event was widely advertised,
not many people participated in the competition.
The latest international dancing competition was held at
the hotel, which is one of the most well-known hotels in
the country. The hotel spent a lot of money on advertising
the event since it wanted to enhance its international
reputation; however, it failed to attract many people.
English language instructors know that students need to
understand the difference between formal and informal
language. However, this understanding cannot usually be
acquired quickly.
Homework is a vital and valuable part of education. As there are
only a few hours in each school day, there is not enough time to
cover properly all the subjects (that) children need to study. As such,
setting homework can help extend study beyond school hours, and
this allows a wider and deeper education. Setting homework also
makes the best use of teachers, who can spend lesson time teaching
rather than supervising individual work that could be done at home.
Education is about pushing boundaries, so learning should not stop
at the entrance to the classroom. Homework allows students to take
skills learnt in the classroom and apply them at home. It also
encourages them to go above and beyond what they do in school.
For instance, students learn how to read at school, but in order to
become a better reader, they need to practice reading at home,
where they can get help from parents and can learn at their own
pace.
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Three Areas of Study
1. Self and Personal Development
2. Society and Culture
3. Science, Technology & Environment
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Formative Assessment 2
Assignments
1. APA Quiz on Moodle
[Please study the Guide to Citation Skills
before your attempt!!]
2. Formative Assessment 1
- Paraphrasing exercises
3. Formative Assessment 2
- First draft of your body paragraph