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we will go over the Performance Indicators on the rubric, and look at some suggestions and examples from a paper will go over citations and proper documentation of evidence we will go over some general formatting tips and suggestions for the final draft of your research paper
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Compelling thesis or question Coherent, complex, sophisticated arguments support organizing idea/thesis
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Look at each sentence in your paper and ask yourself: Does it connect to the inquiry question? Does the sentence belong in the paragraph that it is in? Is it written simply and is it easy to understand?
Look at your word choices. Are you using academic words? Are you defining them for your reader?
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Specific, relevant, and highly persuasive evidence from both primary and secondary sources Uses quotations and paraphrasing appropriately
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Be specific in your writing. Look at the two examples below. The first sentence is too general and does not paraphrase appropriately. The second is specific and appropriately paraphrases from an attributed source.
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Clear introduction presents thesis in a highly engaging, compelling manner Consistent, effective transitions Distinct conclusion that supports idea/general thesis
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Look at your introductory paragraph and ask yourself: Does it convey the problem that you are trying to show? Does it contain a fact as a hook for your reader? Does it display the actual inquiry question? Does it preview what the paper will be exploring?
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Use your topic sentences as transitions. Do not use headings to transition between ideas. Look at the two examples below.
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Does it reflect on the solutions that you have proposed to the inquiry question? Does it show a plan for future or additional research? Does it connect to the introductory paragraph?
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Ideas and voice reflect a highly informed awareness of the larger historical, political, or cultural context surrounding questions addressed in the paper.
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Look back at the facts and details that you have included in the research paper and ask yourself: Do you use facts and details from different sources? Did you incorporate the question(s) that the reviewers asked in the first and second drafts?
Are your sources relevant (from the last 5 years) and applicable to the context (New York City, New York, U.S.A.)?
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Confident, highly fluid writing style Well developed original ideas that are engaging and articulate
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Make each sentenceand each wordspecific and meaningful. Look at the two examples below.
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As best as possible, make sure that your sentences are grammatically accurate. Keep them simple! Look at the two examples below for some ideas.
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To use appropriate documentation, we will need to talk about this in three steps: 1) When to use a citation in your research paper 2) How to cite the source in the sentence
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This sentence needs to be cited because it contains a fact that needs be substantiated. Also, it is the first time that this fact is mentioned in the research paper. Lets rewrite and cite this sentence
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Notice that the sentence now contains an objective fact and includes a citation (KIDS COUNT Data Center, 2012) that shows where and when that fact was recorded.
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Notice that the the citation is in parentheses ( ) and it corresponds to what is found on the WORKS CITED page. It also includes the year of publication. Finally, notice that the period comes after the citation (KIDS COUNT Data Center, 2012).
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We will use an adapted MLA format to cite in the research paper and the WORKS CITED page. I am more interested in you knowing when and what to cite rather than how and in what format you cite.
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Here are several websites that will help you generate your sources: http://www.easybib.com/ http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/1/ http://library.albany.edu/usered/cite/citing.html
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The WORKS CITED page should be a separate page all to itself and should be the last page of your document.
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+ Cover Page
The cover page for your paper:
Should be the first page of your document It should contain ONLY the title of the paper and the heading It should NOT have a page number
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The title for your paper:
Should be at the top of the cover page; centered It should be in all capital letters It should be in the form of a statement, but still connected to your inquiry question
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Example:
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+ Cover Page
The heading for your paper:
Should be at the bottom of the cover page; centered It should capitalize proper nouns It should include the school name, subject, teachers name, unit title, and student names
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+ Formatting
Your research paper:
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Should be in Times New Roman font, size 12 It should keep standard Word document margins (1 on top and bottom, 1.25 on sides) It should not use headings to introduce paragraphs It should be double-spaced It should include page numbers (except in the title page) at the bottom-center of the pages
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The final draft of your research paper is due Friday, May 4* You should save it as a Word document Save it as, Title-Student Names Send it to my email at jtroge@inths.org You will need to get a copy of the paper and the assessed rubric to include in your portfolio
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* If you are presenting your portfolio on this day, you will need to get your final draft in earlier in the week to get assessed
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