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«Russian State Exam. Tasks 39–40: Пособие для подготовки учащихся к выполнению
заданий 39—40 раздела «Письмо» ЕГЭ по английскому языку» создано на основе
накопленного опыта подготовки учащихся выпускных классов к сдаче ЕГЭ
по английскому языку, участия в работе региональной комиссии по проверке
письменных работ ЕГЭ выпускников и опыта работы в качестве тьютора при
подготовке экспертов ЕГЭ по разделу «Письмо». Пособие может быть использовано
как на уроках в 10–11 классах, так и в рамках курсов по выбору или индивидуаль-
ных занятий при подготовке учащихся к выполнению заданий ЕГЭ по английскому
языку раздела «Письмо». Упражнения пособия могут использоваться выборочно,
в зависимости от степени подготовки учащихся и времени на подготовку.
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Unit 2.
House and home
Housing
Household chores
Task 39.
Letter writing
1. Analysing a sample letter content.
Completing the task. Formal / informal
style. Number of words.
Shopping 2. More writing practice 49
City life and country life (writing tasks pool).
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Unit 4. Hobbies and interests Task 40. 1. Looking into the content. Matching
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arguments with the tasks.
Free time Music Essay writing 2. Specifying the ideas in the
and culture Reading books Reading detective / arguments by means of examples.
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Unit 5. School studies
School life
Task 39.
Letter writing
1. Analysing the sample letter:
• content;
Education Further education
• organisation;
• language usage.
Learning a foreign Error correction. Making improvements.
language 2. More writing practice 84
(writing tasks pool).
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Unit 7. Popular destinations
Ways of travelling
Task 39.
Letter writing
1. Analysing the sample letter:
• content;
Countries around Traditions and customs
• organisation;
• language usage.
the world Global tourism 2. Error corrections. 112
3. Letter writing (writing tasks pool).
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Unit 7. Popular destinations 2. Some people think 1. Brainstorming ideas on the topic. 117
that international 2. Matching halves of the sentences
Countries around Ways of travelling
tourism brings many to build an argument.
the world Traditions and customs disadvantages to local 3. Planning and making notes for
Global tourism communities. an essay.
4. Writing an essay.
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Unit 8. Inventions and
discoveries
Task 39.
Letter writing
1. Sample letter analysis:
• content;
Science Modern IT • organisation;
• language usage.
and technology. Modern communication
2. Error corrections.
3. Letter writing (writing tasks pool).
Communication,
the media
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… and I really admire my elder brother. What about you? Is there a person in your family who
you admire? What is he or she like? Why do you look up at him or her?
...Guess what! I got a new mobile for my birthday!
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Exercise 2. Read the letter again and study the criteria of assessment.
1) Content (2): Содержание является ведущим критерием при оценивании. Если за
содержание учащийся получает 0 баллов, по остальным критериям он также полу-
чает 0 баллов.
• Number of words (100–140)
В личном письме допустимое расхождение по количеству слов может составлять
10% от указанных границ. Таким образом, минимальное количество слов в письме –
90, максимальное – 154. Если учащийся написал менее 90 слов, например, 89, то за
содержание ему поставят 0 баллов. Если количество слов превышает 154, то в работе
отсчитываются 140 слов и проверяется именно эта часть письма. Таким образом, не-
которые аспекты могут быть не оценены, и учащийся теряет балл.
• Aspects 1–3 (answering the questions).
В данном задании учащийся должен дать ответы на следующие вопросы задания:
Is there a person in your family who you admire?
Ответ дан: I think it is my Dad.
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Moscow, Russia
23.03.2014
• The date is under the address
Способы написания даты могут быть разными. Принимаются и британский, и амери-
канский варианты написания, а также полное написание при помощи слов: October,
23d, 2014. Однако следует обратить внимание, что дата, написанная словами, будет
содержать 3 слова, тогда как дата, написанная цифрами (23.03.2104), считается как
одно слово.
3) Language accuracy (2): the use of grammar, vocabulary and spelling
При оценивании личного письма эксперты подсчитывают общее количество языковых
и орфографических ошибок и далее выставляют балл согласно критериям оценива-
ния.
Informal letter writing tips
Exercise 1. Look at the layout of an informal letter and indicate its parts:
Salutation, address, date, main body (answering the questions), thanking for the previous
letter, main body (asking the questions), signing off, signature, reference to the previous
contact, ending the letter.
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Address
Salutation Date
Signing off
Signature
Exercise 2. Opening and closing. Match the way we open letters 1–4
to the way we end them A-D: 1-C, 2-A, 3-D, 4-B
1) Put the four endings in order, from most formal to most informal.
Yours faithfully, Yours sincerely, Best wishes, Lots of love
2) Which of them would you use in an informal letter?
1, 3
Exercise 3.
A. Look at the expressions A-K and match them with purposes 1-11.
A-4, B-8, C-1, D-11, E-3, F- 7, G-9, H-2, I-5, J-6, K-10
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Dear Patricia,
(1) Many thanks for your letter. (2) It was nice to hear from you again. I’m really sorry I
didn’t answer before. I was really busy with my project.
(3) As for your questions, I usually wear a skirt and a blouse or a dress, but actually in Russia,
it doesn’t really matter what you’re wearing. However, clothes can vary depending on different
occasions. For example, teens prefer to dress smart for a party and to wear casual or disco
clothes for dancing. As for me, my favourite type of clothes is jeans and hoodies.
(4) By the way, great news! Where is your sister going to celebrate her marriage? How many
people will be there? What plans do they have for their honeymoon?
(5) I’d better finish now. My mum’s calling me.
(6) Write back soon.
(7) Best wishes,
Asya
Exercise 4.
A. What makes a letter sound informal? Put a tick: or a cross Х
• A friendly and personal tone
• Contracted verb forms like I’m and hasn’t
• Passive verb forms Х
• Phrasal verbs
• Polite expressions like I would be most grateful If you would… Х
• Informal expressions such as a bit (for "a little”), etc.
B. Mark the following phrases as formal (F) and informal (I):
1) F
2) F
3) I
4) I
5) F
6) F
7) I
8) I
9) I
10) F
11) I
12) I
Exercise 5. – Exam Tip SB p.17
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Exercise 6. How to count the words in your writing? Count the words in the
following:
• 03/06/2014 – 1 слово;
• the 3d of June, 2014 – 5 слов;
• 03.06.2014 – 1 слово;
• Dear Patricia, – 2 слова;
• I’m glad to hear from you again. – 7 слов. Стяжные формы глаголов I’m,
don’t, etc. считаются как одно слово;
• I’ve got an elder brother. He’s rather hard-working. – 8 слов. Сложные слова
типа hard-working считаются как одно слово;
• I often use my laptop instead of a TV-set to watch movies, listen to music, etc. –
16 слов. Сокращение etc. также считается как одно слово.
Moscow
Russia
2/06/2014
Dear David,
Thank you for your letter. Sorry for not having written earlier, but I was busy at school.
You asked me about a typical Russian teenager. Well, Russian teenagers are in fact very
ordinary. They think their teachers make them work hard and friendship is the most important
thing in their lives. Parents think that modern teens are awful, but I think they criticize them
for no reason. As for their hobbies, they are quite different. That’s all about it.
Anyway, it’s great that you like skateboarding. Is it difficult to ride it?
I’ve got to go now. Keep in touch!
Yours,
Peter
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Moscow
Russia
2/06/2014
Hi there!
How are you? I’m fine!
Well, Russian teenagers are the same as in the other countries. They like playing computer
games and doing sports. I think the most popular activity among boys is football and as for the
girls, tastes differ. They are fond of music and going shopping. As for me, I like hanging out
with my friends.
Cool! You’ve got a skateboard! Is it big? How many tricks can you do on it? Where do you keep
it?
Write back soon.
Love
Mary Ivanova
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27 November, 2010
Russia, Moscow
Eletskaya st., 20, 42
Dear David, thanks for your letter. I hope you’re fine. Here’s information
about Russian teenagers.
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Dear David,
Thanks for your letter. It was nice to hear from you again. I hope you’re fine.
В следующем абзаце:
I think they are the same like teenagers in other countries. Some of them are polite and well-
behaved, and some of them can be rude and aggressive. But anyway, they are OK and fine. My
mum says that modern teenagers spend too much time on sports, and what about you? They
like to go out and hang out with their friends. The most popular activity is playing computer
games. And they like doing sports. That’s all I want to tell you. Do you need to know anything
else? Do you like to do any other sport? And now about your skateboard. How is it? Do you
know any tricks? Look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes,
Andrew
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Here’s information about Russian teenagers. I think they are the same as teenagers in other
countries. Some of them are polite and well-behaved, and some of them can be rude and
aggressive. As for things they enjoy, I think they like to go out and hang out with their friends.
The most popular activities are playing computer games and doing sports.
That’s all I want to tell you.
By the way, what about your new hobby? How often do you go skateboarding? Do you do it
alone or with your friends? Can you do any tricks?
Look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Andrew
Linking ideas
В таблице представлены союзы, наиболее типичные для написания личного письма
в соответствии с неформальным стилем.
Exercise 1. Complete the sentences from different letters using linking words.
1-B. My Mum asks me to go shopping. I also do some dishwashing.
2-C. Russian teenagers don’t differ from the teens abroad. What is more, they have
many similar hobbies and interests.
3-B. Though I often have arguments with my parents about my spare time, we are good
friends.
4-C. Many teenagers like to spend their time playing computer games, but my hobby is
music.
5-A. Sometimes they spend too much time on their hobbies and as a result they don’t
pass their exams well.
6-B. My sister didn’t work hard. However, she still passed.
7-A. Many modern teenagers can have health problems due to the pressure at school
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Language usage
Task 1. Read the task.
You have received a letter from your English-speaking friend Emily who writes:
…By the way, could you tell me what type of clothes Russian teens wear nowadays? Is there
any special fashion for teens? What kind of clothes do you usually wear?
Guess what! My sister is getting married next summer…
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(11) It really a good news that your sister is getting (11) it is really good
news (gr+gr)
(12) married. I’m so happy and proud. Is she happy with (12)
(13) him. Where did they know each other, your sister (13) him? (p) meet
and (voc)
(14) her husband? Where they want to spend their (14) where are they
going (gr)
(15) marriage? (15) honeymoon (voc)
(16) Best wishes, (16)
(17) Peter (17)
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Guided practice
Task 1. Read the task.
You have received a letter from your English-speaking friend Pam who writes.
…Yesterday my mum told me off because I didn’t tidy my room. What about you? Do you
help your parents about the house? What are your duties? Who cooks most of the meals in
your home?
As for my plans for the summer, I’m going to Spain with my friends. We’ll be studying
Spanish at a summer school…
Moscow,
Russia
5.02.2015
Dear Pam,
Thank you for your letter. It was nice to hear from you again.
Sorry for not answering you earlier: I was busy with my project.
You asked me if I help my parents about the house. Actually, I try to help my parents as they
are very busy. I usually clean my room, throw away the garbage and sometimes buy some
food. However, I don’t cook any meals as my mum usually does it.
It’s great news that you’re going to Spain. Where are you going to live there? Where is the
summer school situated? Are you going to visit any places of interest there?
That’s all for now.
Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Maria
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Yesterday my friends and I went to the cafe. During our lunch we discussed a lot of
topics. What kind of things do you talk about with your friends and where do you
prefer to talk? Do you discuss the same things with your parents? Why / why not?
Last week I watched a musical…
Следует обратить внимание учащихся на то, что даже если два вопроса стоят в одном
предложении, то нужно обязательно ответить на каждую его часть. То же касается от-
дельно стоящих Why / why not?, которые обязательно нуждаются в пояснении.
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Many people think that it is better to be an only child in a family than to have brothers or
sisters.
Nowadays, there is an opinion that being an only child in a family gives one Paragraph 1
more opportunities than when growing with siblings. However, there are
families that prefer to have many children. So, is life better for children who grow
up with or without brothers and sisters?
In my opinion, there are more benefits than drawbacks of being an only Paragraph 2
child. Firstly, it is hard to deny that children with no brothers or sisters are more
confident and secure as they get more attention from their parents than children
in large families. Secondly, it is also true that brothers and sisters in large families
often argue a lot. They have to share possessions and living space, and this can
lead to conflicts, while an only child doesn’t face this problem.
Nonetheless, some people claim that children with no brothers or sisters may Paragraph 3
sometimes feel lonely, as they have no one at home to play with. Moreover, it is
"believed that they are often spoilt", because their parents give them whatever
they want, so they don’t learn to share or to co-operate with other people.
Personally, I cannot agree with these people. Having brothers or sisters does Paragraph 4
not always mean being good friends with them, especially if there is a large
generation gap. In addition, nowadays, it is easy to find friends to communicate
in social nets or in the school community and learn to help and support them in
difficult situations.
To sum up, in my view, there are clearly more advantages of being an only child, Paragraph 5
though it depends on personal experience and individual circumstances. (267)
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Topic /Focus
Приступая к написанию сочинения, важно правильно понять, о чем тема. Поэтому не-
обходимо внимательно прочитать рубрику.
Ключевая идея данного задания – это то, что обсуждение планов и идей спо-
собствует укреплению семьи. Однако, не прочитав рубрику внимательно, мож-
но сузить тему до проблемы, следовать или нет советам родителей.
Sharing one’s plans and ideas with parents contribute to a family’s mutual
understanding and harmony.
Первый абзац написан на другую тему: насколько полезно подросткам следовать со-
ветам родителей. Несмотря на то что автор привел два хороших развернутых аргумен-
та, они не будут засчитаны.
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B. Personally I don’t agree with these people. Firstly, it is much easier to communicate
with the members of your family if you don’t have secrets from each other. Secondly,
having secrets can lead to misunderstanding between the close people and even
arguments as soon as their secrets are revealed….
Второй абзац содержит аргументы, отстаивающие мнения автора о том, что плохо
иметь секреты друг от друга: единственное, не хватает акцента на то, что наличие та-
ких секретов отразится именно на взаимоотношениях в СЕМЬЕ.
C. However, some people think that sharing with one’s family everything you think
about can be a reason for a quarrel. For example, if you’re born in a family of
engineers, you may have some troubles if you say that you hate maths and prefer
literature. Moreover, your parents tell you what they would do in each situation,
but you are not them, so you should learn how to solve problems yourself.
В третьем абзаце первый аргумент отражает заявленную тему: some people think that
sharing with one’s family everything you think about can be a reason for a quarrel,
а второй скорее на тему, стоит ли подросткам следовать советам родителей: Moreover,
your parents tell you what they would do in each situation, but you are not them, so
you should learn how to solve problems yourself.
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Exercise 1. Read the sample essay again and find justifications for the given
arguments:
Argument Justification / example
children with no brothers or sisters are as they get more attention from their
more confident and secure parents than children in large families
brothers and sisters in large families They have to share possessions and living
often argue a lot space, and this can lead to conflicts
children with no brothers or sisters as they have no one at home to play
may sometimes feel lonely with.
they are often “spoilt“, because their parents give them
whatever they want so they don’t learn
to share or to co-operate with other
people.
Having brothers or sisters does not especially if there is a large generation
always mean being good friends with gap.
them,
Exercise 2. Read the second paragraph of another opinion essay on the same topic.
Make some improvements considering the following questions:
a. What information is irrelevant?
b. What is NOT logical?
In my opinion, there are many advantages of having siblings. First, children who
have brothers or sisters learn many values and life skills that are necessary in
life. This includes sharing, considering the feelings and understanding people.
(1) There are many things that you can share: toys, T-shirts and even shoes.
(2) Also, you can share the money parents give you. As a result, children who
have siblings are better able to make and maintain friendship. Secondly, in many
families elder siblings protect and support the younger ones. They help them
to stand up to a bully and prevent them from being hurt. Yesterday my elder
brother had a talk with the boy that took my mobile phone.
(3) However, he smokes a lot and the smell is awful!
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However, some people believe that having siblings has some disadvantages.
To begin with, conflicts between brothers or sisters are inevitable. The older
ones can tease their younger ones, while the younger ones would try to defend
themselves. Children borrow their stuff without permission, push each other,
and even fight. Moreover, when there are several children in a family, the
parents have to divide their time, money and even love equally. As a result,
children may feel abandoned and depressed and have less pocket money.
2. However, I don’t agree with these opinions. Though children might have some
conflicts, which is just inevitable in people’s lives, this teaches them to solve the
problems and be more tolerant.
Это логичное возражение по поводу неизбежных конфликтов в больших семьях.
3. They might be true, but life without my elder brother would be boring and
monotonous.
Аргумент совсем не логичен. Это рассуждение о жизни без брата вообще.
4. Personally, I disagree with my opponents because when your parents get older,
your siblings help you to look after them.
Данный контраргумент не относится ни к одному из приведенных в предыдущем аб-
заце.
5. Though they may be right, I can’t agree with them. When parents pay too much
attention to their children and give them everything they want, they grow selfish
and spoilt. So, in my opinion, in big families children having equal amount of
love and money learn to be modest and rely on themselves.
Данный контраргумент можно принять. В нем развивается обратная сторона ситуации,
когда родители не уделяют должного внимания всем детям в многодетной семье.
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Linking ideas
Exercise 1. Look at the expressions that link different ideas. Which of them can you
find in the sample essay?
В образце используются следующие средства связи:
However, so, in my opinion, firstly, secondly, while, nonetheless, moreover, because,
so, in addition.
Exercise 2. Choose the correct alternative.
1. Despite.
2. However.
3. Furthermore.
4. Nevertheless.
5. Nevertheless.
6. Although.
Exercise 3. Students’ own answers.
Exercise 4.
1) 1-B 2-D 3-C 4-A
2) Возможные варианты предложений:
Secondly / Moreover, you can be sure your home-made outfit is original. As a result,
when you go out on a special occasion you are much less likely to meet someone
wearing the same dress as you!
However, it is not always cheap because / as / since you need a good sewing
machine, which can be very expensive, and using the best fabric and sewing materials
adds to the cost of an outfit.
In addition, it is time-consuming as it often takes more than a month to design and
sew an elaborate piece of clothing.
Exercise 5. Comment on the following statement.
It is believed that family traditions unite the members of a family. However, some
argue that they are a waste of time. What is your opinion?
1) 1-C; 2-E; 3-D; 4-A; 5-B.
2) Возможные варианты предложений:
Firstly, keeping up family traditions provides a sense of identity because you begin to
understand your past, and know that you belong to your family.
In addition, it brings confidence in children. It is the fact that / it is hard to deny
that children who know their family’s history are more well-adjusted and self-
confident and have fewer emotional and behaviour problems.
Moreover, following traditions strengthen the family bonds because through regular
family dinners or activities, the familial solidarity is instilled.
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It also teaches values providing a chance for face-to –face communication, thus,
helping family members to get to know and trust each other more closely.
Besides of that, it connects generations as it is true that we all have a lot of great
memories of interacting with grandmothers and grandfathers.
Developing counter-arguments
При обучении учащихся умению приводить контраргументы, следует обратить их
внимание на то, что абзац с контраргументом может начинаться с фразы про мнение
других людей (I don’t agree with these people’s opinion) либо с фразы об аргументах
(I don’t agree with these arguments).
Далее важно, что контраргументы должны соответствовать тематике высказанного
мнения и быть логичными.
В таблице Книги для учащегося приведен пример логичного контраргумента на мне-
ние других людей, однако типичной ошибкой учащихся является добавление допол-
нительных аргументов, которые могут и не являться контраргументами на высказанное
чужое мнение или повторение сказанного во втором абзаце.
Например:
Параграф 3. Мнение других людей о том, что лучше: покупать одежду или
шить самим.
In addition, making clothes by your own is not always cheap as you need a good
sewing machine, which can be very expensive, and using the best fabrics and
sewing materials adds to the cost of an outfit.
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Exercise 1
1-C; 2-A.
Exercise 2. Comment on the following statement:
It is believed that family traditions unite the members of the family. However, some argue that
they are a waste of time. What is your opinion?
Возможные контраргументы:
Argument Counter-argument
1. Firstly, different family activities Unfortunately, not all the memories can
connect generations. We all have a lot cause positive emotions. Families differ
of great memories of interacting with and sometimes there are cases when
grandmothers and grandfathers, for it is better to forget about some sad or
example, playing games or listening to unpleasant things.
bedtime stories.
It is the fact that a family plays an important role in people’s lives. Therefore, it is beyond
doubts that one of the things that helps to strengthen the family bonds is following its
traditions. However, nowadays there are some people who believe that keeping up traditions
doesn’t help to unite a family.
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The majority of teenagers try to follow the fashion. However, adults think that there are more
important things.
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E.g.: Fashionable clothes improve one’s self-esteem. When you are up with
fashion you feel confident. Many youngsters do not always feel confident. They
suffer from stress and anxiety.
Good-looking people usually attract more attention. Smartly dressed teenagers
are more likely to make new friends.
3) ...the student used linking words where necessary?
Помимо нарушения логической последовательности развития аргументов, автор ми-
нимально использовал средства связи, что также отразилось на стройности высказы-
вания. Так, его аргументы выглядели бы значительно логичнее, если бы между ними
были использованы союзы.
Возможный вариант второго абзаца.
Firstly, fashionable clothes improve one’s self-esteem. It is true, that when
you are up with fashion you feel confident, which is very important for
teenagers as many youngsters do not always feel confident and suffer from
stress and anxiety.
Moreover, good-looking people usually attract more attention. Therefore, smartly
dressed teenagers are more likely to make new friends.
Третий абзац содержит мнение других людей. Однако это мнение не соответствует
заявленной теме – о том, какие приоритеты у детей и родителей: подростки хотят вы-
глядеть модно и делают все для этого, а их родители считают, что есть более важные
вещи, на которые стоит обращать внимание. В данном абзаце речь идет о том, что
родители не современны и не понимают подростковую моду. Логичнее было бы на-
писать, какие вещи они считают более важными, например, учебу, выбор профессии
и тому подобное.
4) ...s/he used the requires number of words (200–250)?
Написаны 30 слов во вступлении и 211 слов в остальной части: таким образом, объ-
ем высказывания соответствует норме.
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Old people’s homes are the most suitable residences for the elderly.
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Exercise 3.
Возможное развитие аргументов в поддержку и против проживания стариков в домах
для престарелых:
For Against
1 ) Facilities 1) How would they feel?
To benefit from (-ing), to feel unwanted, suffer from boredom,
necessary facilities, suitable depression, be surrounded by one’s
E.g.: They can benefit from necessary children and grandchildren, to feel
facilities, such as comfortable living the atmosphere of true love,
rooms, gyms, walking areas, etc. not to like the idea, to be considered.
E.g.: They might feel unwanted,
because they will miss their family,
2) Medical care where they were surrounded by
an emergency, to attend their children and grandchildren.
a sick resident As a result, they might suffer
E.g.: They will have an opportunity from boredom and depression…
to be taken care of, as the Only in a family one can feel the
medical personal attends a sick atmosphere of a true love…
resident in cases of emergency. Their opinion must be considered…
2) The food
3) Communication with unsuitable
other people The food might not suit them…
to meet and get friends, 3) The care
similar interests to treat with respect,
E.g.: They will be treated with E.g.: They might not be treated with
respect and might be able to meet respect, and as a result, suffer from it.
new friends, and communicate with They might even suffer from
people of the same ages and interests. physical mistreatment.
4) Living conditions
(un)hygienic, to be cleaned
save money on sth, cleaning staff
E.g.: The living conditions may not
be appropriate and even unhygienic
as it sometimes happens that they
save money on the cleaning staff…
Развивая данную тему, нужно обратить внимание учащихся на то, что некоторые
идеи могут стать друг для друга контраргументами.
Например, в домах для престарелых пожилые люди могут попасть как в хорошие
условия для проживания, так и в плохие; получить надлежащий уход или столкнуться
с неуважением; встретить новых друзей или скучать по родным и близким.
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Таким образом, нужно показать, как построить свое сочинение, какие аргументы ис-
пользовать в абзаце – выражении своего мнения, а какие – в абзаце для выражения
несогласия с мнениями других людей.
Например, если выбрать позицию автора: «Я против того, чтобы старики жили
в домах для престарелых», то во втором абзаце можно развивать аргументы № 1 из
графы "against".
Тогда для мнения других людей из графы "for" можно взять аргументы
№ 1 ("facilities"), № 2 ("medical care"), а в качестве контраргументов – идеи
из графы "against, аргументы № 3 ("care"), № 4 ("living conditions").
It is considered that giving pocket money to teenagers doesn’t do them any good.
Exercise 2.
1-C, 2-D, 3-B, 4-A.
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Exercise 5.
Мнение автора совпадает с утверждением в рубрике, поэтому из предложенных за-
ключений наиболее подходящим является первое.
1. All in all, it can be said that each generation has their problems in life. However,
I consider that there are reasons to criticize teenagers today.
2. To sum up, the main reason for such unjust attitude to teenagers is the generation gap. It is
difficult for adults to admit that teenagers have the right to have their own fashion,
music and habits. Of course not all teens are ideal, but by and large they are no worse
than their parents.
3. In conclusion, I would like to mention that my grandparents also had some problems with
their parents. They also didn’t understand each other, therefore today’s teenagers are not
worse than the previous generations of teenagers used to be.
Some people think that the most important thing in people’s life is family.
Exercise 2. Plan your essay. What opinion are you going to support?
Complete the following paragraph plan for your essay, making notes on what you
are going to include in each paragraph.
Вариант развития темы с мнением в пользу семьи.
Из приведенных аргументов нужно выбрать один, который может стать уникальным
контраргументом для мнения других людей. Очевидно, им может стать идея о том, что
семья – это поддержка и забота: ensures security: provides with support and care.
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You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Robert who writes:
…My parents have decided to sell our house in London and to move to the countryside. Do
many people move from big cities to the country in Russia? Would you like to live in a city or
in the country? Why? What about your parents’ preferences?
Anyway, I have taken up horse-riding in order to prepare myself for life in the country …
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Exercise 1. Read the sample letter. Why will the student NOT score maximum points
for the content?
Yours sincerely,
Daniel*
* Выделенная жирным часть письма не будет проверяться из-за превышения объема слов.
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of places of entertainment in the city, such as night clubs and entertainment centers
therefore it would be better to live in Moscow.
• What about your parents’ preferences?
Ответ на вопрос не дан.
4. Are there 3 questions about the new hobby?
Вопросы заданы:
Could you tell me where you go to do it?
Isn’t it dangerous?
What is the name of your horse?
5. Why will the student NOT score maximum points for the CONTENT?
Несмотря на то что письмо написано грамотно, автор допустил следующие недочеты
по критерию «Содержание»:
1) превысил заданный объем слов. Из-за этого выделенная жирным шрифтом
часть, содержащая вопросы, проверке не подлежит;
2) не дал ответа на один вопрос;
3) использовал формальный стиль для написания личного письма.
6. Students’ own answers.
…I had a row with my boyfriend yesterday. He hates going shopping with me! Do you like
shopping? Where do you prefer to buy clothes: in small boutiques or large mega-markets?
Why? Do you go shopping with your parents or friends?
By the way, a new sporting centre has been opened in our town…
In fact, I don’t like shopping, especially buying clothes. So, I neither go shopping with my
friends, nor with my parents. Usually my Mum buys clothes for me as she has a wonderful
taste or I try to find something in the Internet shops.
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Nowadays when many new houses are being built both in the cities and in the outskirts, many
people are considering where it would be more beneficial to live. Some of them think that
having a flat in the city is more convenient than living in a house in the country. So, who is
right?
Though they are right, it can be argued that if you want to have privacy, you need to pay for
it. In addition, some flats in the center of the city can be as expensive as houses. For example,
a single room flat in the center of the city can be worth a two-storied house in the
countryside.
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Exercises 1-2.
Sample answer:
При выполнении данного задания важно обратить внимание учащихся на средства
связи и ключевые слова, при помощи которых можно установить логику развития
высказывания:
(1) The question where it is better to live is being discussed these days. (2) Some
people are strongly convinced that the best place to live for them and their children
is some quiet place in the country. (3) Others are in favour of living in a city.
(4) In my opinion, life in the country has more advantages. (5) Firstly, the lifestyle
can be very enjoyable as one can make the most of the environment. (6) For example,
there are fields and forests where you can go walking or have a picnic. (7) Secondly,
in the rural community one doesn’t feel the rush and pressure that people can get
under while living in big cities. (8) Therefore, it is more beneficial for the children’s
and people’s health.
(9) However, some people prefer to live in big cities. (10) They say that the prospects
are not good for people in the country, they can’t find a job there and have to travel
to the nearby towns and cities to work. (11) This means that unless you have a car,
travelling can be a bit of a problem. (12) Furthermore, thanks to all the pesticides and
chemical fertilizers that are used in crops, the environment is beginning to suffer.
(13) Though they may be right, personally I think that this is beginning to change,
with ‘greener’ approaches to farming in general. (14) Also, in some areas tourism is
bringing some needed money and employment to the local villages.
(15) All things considered, though there might be advantages of living in the country,
I believe that life in the city can be more interesting and exciting because there are
many places of entertainment there.
Exercise 3.
В сочинении сделан нелогичный вывод: автор развивал аргументацию за проживание
за городом, а вывод сделал в поддержку жизни в городе. Это считается нарушением
логики.
When people reach the age of 18 and finish school they should move away from home and start
their own life.
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Exercise 1.
A-6
B-12
C-1
D-10
E-8
F-5
G-4
H-7
I-2
J-3
K-11
L-9
Sample essay:
Nowadays a lot of young people move away from home in their late teens,
(1)which is an important part of growing up but the process has both its rewards
and challenges.
In my opinion, (2) there can certainly be some real advantages to moving away
from home. First of all, it gives you real freedom, and it is much easier to have a
proper personal relationship. (3) As well as that, the freedom affects all sorts of small
things, and it means you can watch whatever you like on TV, (4) you can go to bed
when you want and so on. Finally, you can share a flat with mates your own age,
who have the same interests, (5) and that can make life a lot more fun.
(6) On the other hand, moving away from home has some drawbacks as well. (7)
Firstly, when you move away, you can miss the warmth and support of your family,
and you can end up feeling quite lonely and homesick. (8) On top of that, you can
also have money problems because you have to pay for rent, food and so on, (9) and
it means that your standard of living can fall sharply. Lastly, you have to do a lot
more domestic work – you have to cook for yourself, do your laundry and ironing and
keep the place clean.
(10) Personally, I can’t fully agree with these opinions. Nowadays it is not a
problem to be in contact with your family when you move away as you can make
a call or contact your family via the Internet. Secondly, if you are short of money,
your parents can transfer it on your credit card. Finally, taking care of oneself is only
beneficial for a person, (11) as one learns certain life skills.
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So all in all, moving away from home is probably a good thing, (12) and anyway
it is something that everyone has to do at some stage. However, it can be made
a bit easier with a little support from your family, and it can help a great deal if
you stay in touch with them after you leave.
Exercise 2. Why will the student NOT score maximum points for the content and
organisation?
1) В сочинении 350 слов, поэтому проверке будет подлежать лишь часть
в 250 слов, то есть абзацы с контраргументами и выводом проверяться не будут.
2) В третьем абзаце автор не указал, чье мнение он представляет. Идет общее рас-
суждение о недостатках жизни вне родительского дома.
Task 4. Comment on the following statement.
Тема сочинения акцентирует внимание на том, что жизнь в городе в XXI веке довольно
вредна для здоровья и не дает никаких положительных моментов. То есть, продумы-
вая аргументы, нужно будет не просто писать о преимуществах или недостатках жизни
в современном городе, а обратить внимание на то, насколько это вредно / не вредно
для здоровья.
Exercise 2. Think of different vocabulary you can use to say the same things.
Возможный вариант использования другой лексики:
City living: urban living, lifestyle
21st century: contemporary, modern, nowadays
stressful: oppressive
offers: provides, supports
advantages: benefits, opportunities
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Exercise 5. Write an essay. Follow the plan in exercise 4. Check for grammar,
vocabulary and spelling.
Many people believe that online shopping is the best way to shop.
Introduction:
При выполнении этого задания следует напомнить учащимся о том, что во вступлении
нельзя использовать рубрику слово в слово. Выделите ключевые слова и подумайте,
какими словосочетаниями или синонимами их можно заменить.
Возможный вариант использования другой лексики:
People believe: there is an opinion, it is considered, etc.
Online shopping: buying goods via the Internet.
The best way: the most beneficial way, the most convenient way.
Students own answers.
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You have received a letter from your English pen friend Martha who writes:
…Guess what! I’ve recently joined our local fitness club. Do you do anything special to
stay healthy? I’d like to lose weight. Do you think I should go dieting? What do you
think of a healthy lifestyle?
By the way, my brother has given me a book “Yoga for women”…
Write a letter to Martha.
In your letter:
• answer her questions;
• ask 3 questions about her new book.
Write 100–140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
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Exercise 2. In the letter the student made some grammar mistakes when asking
questions. Can you correct them?
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Moscow, Russia
21/04/2013
Dear Martha,
Thank you for your last letter. I was so glad to hear from you again.
You asked me about health. Leading a healthy way of life should be everyone’s main purpose in
life. Doing sports or simple exercises and trying to avoid harmful food and habits make people
healthy and strong. I try to follow these rules, but sometimes it’s really difficult.
As for you, I think you should lose weight or your boyfriend won’t like you at all. However,
Dieting is OK if you have much time and will.
By the way, is the book long? Are there many good yoga exercises? Can you do any of them
now?
That’s all for now. I must go.
Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Julia
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The young generation of people today is not as healthy as their grandparents used to be.
What is your opinion?
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
• make an introduction (state the problem;
• express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons for your opinion;
• express an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for this opposing opinion;
• explain why you do not agree with the opposing opinion;
• draw a conclusion restating your position.
Exercise 1. Write an introduction to the essay.
Restate the problem using the other words.
Exercise 2. Use the words in brackets to make sentences which will form a part of
your arguments. Use linkers to express cause and result:
as, because (of), since, as a result, due to , for this reason, therefore, that is why, etc.
1) E.g. Firstly, teenagers are fond of eating fast food such as pizza and burgers, which is not
good for their health. (lack vitamins and minerals)
…because these foods lack essential vitamins and minerals.
2) They also contain a large amount of fat and carbohydrates…
• and because of getting too much fat children can suffer from malnutrition;
• so children get too much fat and as result / for this reason can suffer from
malnutrition.
3) Besides, modern children are addicted to computers and TV instead of doing sports,
• as a result / due to this / for this reason, they get overweight and have heart
diseases.
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4) However, many people claim that teenagers’ health today is no worse than their
grandparents had when they were young…
• due to modern health care and better nutrition;
• as / since we have better nutrition and modern health care.
5) Moreover, they don’t die from such diseases as chickenpox, pneumonia or tuberculosis…
• due to vaccination, modern pills, and because there is no hunger;
• as / since they can have vaccination, get modern pills and because there is no
hunger.
6) Of course, young people do not die today of such diseases, but their health is definitely
getting worse,
• since / because / as teenagers eat what they want and skip meals.
7) We must admit that nowadays we are threatened by even more terrible diseases, for
example, AIDS and hepatitis,
• that is why / therefore we should also think about healthy eating.
8) In conclusion I would like to say that our society should pay more attention to the health of
younger generation
• as / because / since they are the basis for the future of the country.
Exercise 3. Students’ own answers.
We should close all fast-food outlets as such food is harmful for people’s health.
What is your opinion?
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
• make an introduction (state the problem);
• express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons for your opinion;
• express an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for this opposing opinion;
• explain why you do not agree with the opposing opinion;
• draw a conclusion restating your position.
Exercise 1. Read and match the arguments with their justifications.
1-C, 2-B, 3-A.
Exercise 2. Make up complete sentences using the ideas above
and proper linking words.
Add some other words if necessary.
1) Firstly, buying fast food is convenient because / as you don’t have to wait for a
long time until your food is prepared.
2) In addition, it is inexpensive, which is important because / since / as teenagers
don’t have much money.
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3) Finally, there are many places where you can have it, such as / for example,
McDonalds.
Exercise 3. Look through the possible opposite opinions and try to think of some
reasons why you wouldn’t agree with them.
Many people believe that the best way to lose weight is following a special diet.
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Other people believe that if you want to lose weight it is very important to keep your eye on
what you eat. To begin with, you should cut out snacks and desserts, which add weight without
boosting energy levels. Besides, you ought to cut down on fat as it is believed to be one of the
major causes of obesity. Finally, you may count the number of calories you eat
every day, which will help to reduce the amount of food you eat and help to lose weight.
Exercise 4. Develop some ideas for paragraph 3. Why might other people believe that
dieting is the best way for losing weight?
Many people do not have an opportunity to consume a healthy meal. Their daily meals consist
of fast food, which contains large amounts of fat and salt. The most significant proof of this
unhealthy lifestyle is the weight gain. Therefore, most of these people have to control
their diet in order to stay in shape either for their appearance or health.
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Though it might be true, I still believe that dieting is not the best way to lose weight.
В качестве контраргумента могут быть использованы идеи из упражнения № 2, напри-
мер про занятия спортом или рассуждения о сбалансированном питании или о меди-
цинской помощи:
The most common and proper method of maintaining one’s weight is eating less oily
food, more green vegetables, fruit and avoiding alcohol.
Individuals who wish to control their weight should seek professional adviсe if they
are unable to reduce their weight after switching over to a healthy diet for a period of
time.
Exercise 6. Students’ own answers.
Doing extreme sports is rather popular nowadays. However, there are people who think that
they should be banned because they are too risky.
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Exercise 2. What are the advantages of doing extreme sports? Develop the following
arguments and add some more ideas of your own.
Возможные варианты аргументов:
1) Nowadays many people are bored with the traditional lifestyle, therefore doing
extreme sports makes a person’s life more thrilling and exciting as they can try a
new experience. For example, taking the plunge when skydiving, people enjoy the
adrenaline rush that throwing themselves into the atmosphere supplies.
2) Moreover, one can learn to cope with unexpected situations, which might be
useful at certain moments of life. In addition, being in an extreme situation can help
one to find out where one’s limits are and overcome difficulties.
Some examples of extreme sports are: skateboarding, ice climbing, whitewater rafting,
zorbing, scuba diving, bungee jumping, skydiving.
Exercise 3. What counter-arguments can you develop for these ideas in exercise 2?
Возможные варианты контраргументов:
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Exercise 5. What counter-arguments can you develop for the ideas in exercise 4?
Возможные варианты контраргументов:
Many people demand that genetically modified food should be banned. Others say it is
unnecessary.
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Exercise 1. Expand on the ideas and write an essay. Use the vocabulary below.
For GMFs:
• food supply for population
Genetic engineering is the way to solve the world’s famine problems.
GMF products might solve the problem of hunger in many developing countries and
provide food supply for the population.
• Can be grown in any areas
As it is easy to increase resistance to various diseases in such plants and make them
pest-resistant, they can be grown in any areas.
It is also cost-effective and thus, the amount of grown food can be doubled to meet the
needs of the population.
• GMFs can be enriched with vitamins and nutrients
Besides, GMFs can be enriched with vitamins and nutrients, and therefore do away
with malnutrition.
Against GMFs:
• dangerous for environment (animals, plants), to harm the crop plant
However, GMFs can be dangerous for environment, as the foreign genes and other
artificial substances they contain can be harmful to plant and animal species.
• can be dangerous for people’s health, can cause an allergic reaction in some
individuals
In addition, they can be dangerous for people’s health and can cause an allergic
reaction in some individuals. What is more, they might have an unexpected negative
impact on any person’s health in the future.
• old GMFs have little nutritional value
Though any GMFs may look fresh, the old ones have little nutritional value.
• economic problems: GMF seeds can be expensive for small farmers
Finally, not all the countries can afford to grow them. For example, GMF seeds can be
expensive for small farmers, thus the possibility to meet the needs of the population can
turn to be an illusion.
Exercise 2. Make notes for your essay
Возможный вариант развития темы:
1) My opinion: I strongly believe that genetically modified food should not be allowed.
• dangerous for environment
• dangerous for people
2) Other people’s opinion:
• GMFs is a food supply for population
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You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Anna who writes:
…My Mum often complains that I spend too much money on souvenirs. To tell the truth, I collect
souvenirs. Do you and your friends collect anything? How do you and your friends spend your
pocket money? What’s your parents’ attitude towards it?
As for the latest news, I have just entered courses….
(7) don’t have our food in school so we waste (7) don’t have meals, at
our pocket school(voc) we spend (voc)
(8) money on food, we are always feel (8) we always feel hungry
hungry in the school. (gr), at school (gr)
(9) My parents are okay with it. (9)
(10) But whatever, I heard you just entered (10) you had just entered (gr)
new courses.
(11) What courses do you enter? Are they (11) What courses have
long for you? What you entered? (gr)
(12) subjects you study there? (12) What subjects do
you study there? (gr)
(13) Good luck on the courses, (13) Good luck on the courses! (p)
(14) Best wishes, (14)
(15) Elisa. (15) Elisa
(после имени точ-
ка не ставится)-(p)
Exercise 2. What other things in the letter should be improved? Analyse the content
and the organisation.
Content:
Есть нарушение в стиле при обращении “Hi, Anna“, нет ссылки на последующие кон-
такты после завершающей фразы (Write back soon / Looking forward to hearing from
you).
Вопрос про курсы “Are they long for you? "не совсем понятен. Возможно, автор имел в
виду "How long do they last?"
Organisation:
Неверно написан сокращенный адрес (Moscow, Russia).
Предложение “We don’t have our food in school so we waste our pocket money on
food, we are always feel hungry in the school" немного нелогично, поэтому его следу-
ет перестроить с акцентом на причинно-следственные связи:
We are always hungry at school because we don’t have meals there, so we spend our
pocket money on food.
As we don’t have our meals at school, we are always hungry, that is why we spend
our pocket money on food.
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For reading adventure stories For reading detective stories For reading science fiction
2, 3, 4, 6 1, 2, 4, 6 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8
Аргументы 2, 4, 6 являются наиболее общими и могут быть отнесены к любым из при-
веденных тем.
Exercise 3. What examples, explanations would you add to make the arguments
sound more specific according to the essays topics?
• Reading adventure stories helps people to feel adventurous in the modern world.
When one reads them, they imagine themselves in the exciting situations and
adventures that are described in a book.
• Reading detective stories develops thinking abilities and logic, because while
following the development of the events one can try to solve the mystery together
with the detective using the suggested evidence and facts.
• Reading science fiction might inspire people to invent new things. For example,
in the middle of the last century in his stories Ray Bradbury described such things
as a cell-phone, 3-D home cinema, remote control, mini head-phones and other
things, which were later invented.
Task 2. Comment on the following statement.
Reading detective stories is a waste of time.
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E.g.: Nowadays the tendency of global warming / air pollution is really important for
people all over the world. It is a controversial problem / question which needs careful
consideration.
Exercise 3. Read the introduction and the second paragraph of a student’s essay.
Why will the student NOT score maximum points for the content?
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Exercise 4. Read the third paragraph of an essay. Why will the student NOT score
maximum points for the content and organisation?
Find and correct 5 vocabulary (voc), 1 grammar (gr), 2 spelling mistakes (sp),
2 mistakes on using linking words. Put a tick ( ) if the line is correct.
(1) In the other side, reading detective stories has (1) on the other hand
(voc)
(2) some weak points. Firstly, when we read detective (2) some disadvantages
(voc)
(3) stories about the central centuries we can’t (3) middle centuries (voc)
(4) understand some words which are used in these (4)
(5) stories. And that is why detective stories become (5) And- не нужно в на-
not чале предложения (на-
рушение линкера)
(6) interesting for us. Then, nowdays some detective (6) secondly - линкер,
nowadays (sp)
(7) stories seem to us illogical becose of its methods of (7) of their methods (gr),
because (sp)
(8) detecting. And I can’t disagree with people who (8) detection (voc),I can’t
think agree / I disagree (g)
(9) that new detective stories are interesting. (9)
(10) Finally, there are lots of murders in detective (10)
stories
(11) and as a result, people become mad. (11) go mad (voc)
Комментарии:
Не высказана другая точка зрения: идет рассуждение об отрицательных моментах
чтения детективов. Первый аргумент сомнителен с точки зрения содержания: какие
слова мы можем не понимать, читая романы, очевидно, Средних веков? Что это за
детективы? Далее приведен аргумент о том, что некоторые детективы нелогичны из-за
методов расследования. Однако автор не приводит никаких примеров. Следующее
предложение о том, что современные детективы неинтересны, по сути, повторяет пре-
дыдущую мысль без объяснения причин.
Наконец, последний аргумент о том, что, читая детективы, люди сходят с ума, так как
в них много убийств, нелогичен по сути и является примером тенденции к обобще-
нию. Во-первых, не во всех детективах много убийств, а во-вторых, вряд ли кто-то
после их прочтения сходит с ума.
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Exercise 1. Read a student’s essay. Why will the student NOT score maximum points
for it?
A. Analyse the content and organization.
1. В сочинении есть необходимое количество слов – 186. Однако автор не соблюдает
предложенный план:
• отсутствуют вступление и формулировка проблемы;
• сочинение не разделено на абзацы, а написано сплошным текстом, в котором
приведено мнение автора о том, что в наше время показывают по телевизору и по-
чему ему это не нравится;
• в конце есть заключение, но не по теме сочинения. Таким образом, в лучшем
случае такое содержание будет оценено на 1 балл.
2. В принципе, сочинение логично, автор использует достаточно средств связи, однако
предложенный план не соблюден полностью. Поэтому за организацию автор, скорее
всего, также получит минимум баллов.
B. Find and correct the vocabulary/grammar/spelling mistakes. Put a tick ( ) if the
line is correct.
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(14) get good audience rating. And it show them when (14) a good audience’s
rating (gr+gr),they show
(gr)
(15) people have dinner or have nothing to do for (15) people are having
dinner (gr)
(16) example, in the evening. Finally, another thing (16) the other thing (gr)
(17)which I think is very bad are the talk programmes, (17) is talk shows (gr+voc)
(18) when people who talk there very bad. They (18) where (v), people who
talk are very bad(gr)
(19) sometimes show not important things which (19) which are discussed
discuss (gr)
(20) for hours. In conclusion I can say that I don’t like to (20) In conclusion, (p)
(21) watch TV and I prefer downloading some (21) don’t like watching (gr)
(22) interesting films and watch them in my spare time. (22) and watching them
(gr)
Exercise 3. Write an introduction to your essay. Restate the question in the task in
different words.
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Exercise 1. Read the writing tip. Then rewrite the sentences using preparatory it and
the words in brackets.
1. As many of us download more music and films than we buy from shops in CD forms,
it is highly likely that in the next decade it will be the turn1 of books.
2. It is / would be wrong to suggest that traditional books will disappear.
3. It is undoubtedly true that they are more environmentally friendly as they save paper
and there is no transport cost.
4. It is sometimes argued that e-Books have two major drawbacks: they are currently
very expensive and they rely on batteries.
5. It is not surprising that so many people choose e-Books.
6. It would appear that e-Books will become cheaper as they grow in popularity.
Exercise 2.
A. What sentences from exercise 1 can be used to support the opinion in the task?
Sentences N 1, 3, 6
Some other ideas:
They save space at home: An E-book can hold hundreds of digital novels, while traditional
books occupy meters of shelving.
B. What sentence from exercise 1 can be used to express other people’s opinion?
Can you add some examples or explanations to expand these ideas?
Sentence 4
C. What sentence can be used as a counter-argument to say why you don’t agree
with the people? Can you suggest a counter-argument for the second idea?
Sentence 6; battery-life will improve in the coming years.
Exercise 3. Students’ own answers.
Public libraries are becoming less popular and they will soon disappear.
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First of all, many people prefer to read paper books. However, as it is not convenient to keep
many books at home, borrowing them from a library will remain a great opportunity for many
book-lovers. Moreover, libraries are cultural centres organising special events, for example,
meetings with writers, poets or composers. So, this will continue
to attract people.
Nonetheless, many people believe that public libraries are not necessary anymore because nowadays
one can download any kind of reading they like and enjoy themselves not leaving their house. They
think that as it saves time and money there won’t be a need
in going to a public library and as a result, they will be closed.
However, I still can’t fully agree with this. Firstly, not all the books have been transformed into
electronic format yet, so, if one needs a rare or an old book they will find it only in a library.
Secondly, the law protecting authorship rights requires
paying for a book that one wants to download, so in many cases it is not cheap.
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Exercise 1. Read the topic sentences and expand them into paragraphs. Use some of
the ideas below. Add examples and explanations.
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Unit 5. Education
You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend David who writes:
…Tell me about your school. What is your favourite subject? Why? What sports facilities does
the school have? My school has just built a new gym, it’s great! Have you joined any school
clubs?
It’s my basketball team’s first match of the season on Saturday…
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(9) However, our school has only one gymnasium (9) As for sport facilities
and we (voc), there is one
gymnasium (voc), but
(10) haven’t enough time to do sport. At last, (10) haven’t got / don’t have
(gr)
(11) unfortunately, I did not join any school club. (11) I haven’t joined (gr)
(12) By the way, how long do you study (12) how long have you been
basketball? playing (gr+voc)
(13) How many players in your team? Do you (13) How many players are
really enjoy it? there in your team? (gr)
(14) Well, it’s all about it. Looking forward to (14)
hearing from you.
(15) Best wishes, (15)
(16) Kirill (16)
Answer the following questions to analyse it.
1. Content:
1) How many words are there in the letter? 112
2) Have the following questions been answered?
• What is your favourite subject? Why?
Ответ на вопрос дан: I really like English language, and I don’t know why. I’m
proud of ability to speak one more language.
• What sports facilities does the school have?
Ответ на вопрос дан: However, our school has only one gymnasium.
• Have you joined any school clubs?
Ответ на вопрос дан: At last, unfortunately, I did not join any school club.
3) Are there 3 questions about the basketball match?
Не все заданные в письме вопросы о предстоящем баскетбольном матче:
By the way, tell me, how long do you study basketball? How many players in your
team? Do you really enjoy it?
Засчитается только вопрос о количестве игроков в команде, поэтому данный аспект
будет считаться невыполненным.
4) Have the rules of politeness been observed?
Практически да. В письме отсутствует лишь ссылка на предыдущие контакты.
5) Is the style formal/informal?
Стиль неформальный в соответствии с требованиями.
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2. Organisation:
1) Is the letter written logically?
Не совсем. Очевидно, это связано также с неверным использованием средств связи:
aвтор заявляет о том, что он гордится способностью говорить еще на одном языке
"I’m proud of ability to speak one more language", а далее пишет, что в школе один
спортивный зал и у них нет времени на спорт.
"However, our school has only one gymnasium and we haven’t enough time to do
sport".
И далее снова нелогичный переход к третьему вопросу:
At last, unfortunately, I did not join any school club.
2) Are the linking words used in a proper way?
Некоторые средства связи используются неверно (However, At last, and, см. предыду-
щий комментарий), отчего нарушается логика высказывания.
3) Is the letter divided into paragraphs?
Да, письмо правильно разделено на абзацы.
4) Are the date and the address written correctly?
Нет. Следует писать: Moscow, Russia
5) Are the salutation, ending the letter, signing off and signature written on
separate lines?
Не совсем. Ссылка на последующие контакты стоит не на отдельной строке:
"Looking forward to hearing from you".
3-4. Students’ own answers.
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There are a few reasons why I support the idea of introducing school uniform. Firstly, school
administrators often face a complicated task setting a dress code. That is why it may be easier
to have a uniform than to detail and specify independently chosen clothing. Secondly, parents
often spend much money on teenagers’ clothes following their interest in fashion and pressure.
Therefore, school uniforms refocus this issue. Finally, wearing school uniforms emphasizes
membership and group identity, fostering school and community spirit.
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Exercise 3. Read the notes for arguments against wearing school uniforms and
match them with justifications. Make up sentences using the correct linking words.
a-2 Uniforms interfere with students’ rights for self-expression: teenagers can’t
express their tastes and personality.
b-4 They are unnecessary expense: can create economic problems.
c-1 They don’t prevent bad behaviour: they can’t prevent students from expressing
unpopular or inappropriate views in other ways.
d-3 It is not good for students’ self-esteem: they have to wear something unattractive.
Sentences: students’ own answers.
Exercise 4. Which of the opinions are you going to support? Develop your arguments
and make notes for your essay following the plan.
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Exercise 2. What are the arguments for and against getting marks? Complete the
following table.
1. They might be indicators that show 1. They might not show the real students’
students that they should study better… knowledge…
Schools might not have the unique assess-
ment criteria and, as a result, students
might not deserve the marks they get.
2. In many schools getting good marks 2. This can lead to envy and jealousy
encourages students to compete to be among the students and ruin their rela-
the best. tionships…
3. Getting good marks might arouse 3. Striving for good marks doesn’t often
students’ interest in the subject serving mean to be interested in a subject.
as a stimulus.
4. Universities rank students according 4. Students put the results of formal as-
to their marks, that’s why getting high sessment above the joy of getting knowl-
marks is a good stimulus for the stu- edge, and eventually lose interest in edu-
dents to get good knowledge. cation.
5. Graduates with high marks in their 5. Many employers require working ex-
diplomas are likely to get a better job. perience rather than good marks.
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E.g.: Teachers bring their students up, instilling values and attitudes;
They motivate and encourage students to learn;
They understand their needs and help to overcome problems…
2. Why will the role of teachers be more difficult in the future?
The access to information, to increase, to face challenges.
E.g.: The access to information is increasing nowadays, and teachers face
challenges in their job.
3. What is the role of computers in modern education nowadays?
• To offer online courses and degrees, virtual school, home-schooling, to be
available;
• To attend classes at one’s convenience, face-to-face interaction.
E.g.: Nowadays virtual and online courses are available. One can attend classes
at their convenience without face-to-face interaction.
4. In what educational process are computers the most beneficial?
To provide with information.
E.g.: Computers provide us with necessary information.
5. Why do students need to be supervised?
To be taught different skills, perform better, a sense of responsibility towards sth,
under supervision.
E.g.: Students perform better under supervision which brings a sense of
responsibility towards the study. Students need to be taught different skills…
6. What can’t computers do?
• To provide a human contact.
• To understand.
• To care about.
• To communicate in a social manner.
E.g.: Computers can’t provide a human contact.
They can’t understand the students and care about them;
They can’t communicate in a social manner.
Exercises 2-3. What are the arguments for and against replacing teachers by
computers? Complete the following table:
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2. Online courses, virtual schools 2. Teachers not only teach, but bring the
and degrees, are available, which is students up.
convenient. They motivate and encourage students to
learn.
They understand their needs.
3. Students perform better under
supervision.
Students need to be taught different skills.
Exercise 4. Plan your paragraphs. Complete the following paragraph plan for your
essay, making notes on what you are going to include in each paragraph.
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Paragraph 5 Conclusion:
To sum up, though there are many advantages of using computers
in the educational process, I still believe that teachers will hardly be
substituted by them in the future…..
Some people think that it is possible to get good school education only at elite single-sex
boarding schools abroad.
1. Sending children to prestigious boarding schools is quite common nowadays, especially in the
European countries. But is it really useful for them or is this kind of education much
more harmful than it seems to be?
2. Boarding schools are very popular nowadays. As everyone is aware, this is one of the most
progressive ways of getting education. However, it has its own pluses
and minuses as everything.
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3. Everyone can choose which school to go to. First of all, one will try to find out more about
that school. Let us find some advantages and disadvantages of studying at a prestigious
boarding school abroad.
В этом вступлении лишним является второе предложение. Оно звучит как описание
действия человека, который решил выбрать школу. Таким образом, учащийся отходит
от формулировки проблемы. Кроме этого, учащийся не сформулировал проблему,
а собирается анализировать «за» и «против» обучения в таких школах.
Exercise 3. Read a conclusion from a student’s essay. Why will the student lose
a point for the content and organisation?
Student’s opinion: In my opinion, boarding schools abroad are not the best places
to get a good education…
All things considered, personally I wouldn’t like to study at such a school because it would be
very hard for me to leave my mother. Also, there are very severe rules there and I don’t like
strict discipline because, to my mind, if these principles become the cornerstones of your life,
you will be a serious, unsociable person. I don’t want to become such a dried-up woman, that’s
why I don’t want to study at a boarding school.
Explain why.
A. Some parents have no choice as they have to work outside the city and have not enough time
to take care of their child so sending their child to a boarding school can be a necessary
solution. Х
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Речь о том, что дает обучение вдали от родителей. Нужно сделать акцент, где именно.
С. To start with, students of such a school aim high, so they work hard to achieve success. As a
result, a student who has got into such educational environment, will also try their best
so as not to be worse than others.
E. First of all, these educational institutions usually provide excellent education, which is
definitely good for students. So, children who studied at such schools are likely to enter
a good university and then to get a highly-paid job.
Хороший аргумент: есть основная мысль (excellent education) и объяснение, что это
дает учащимся ”they are likely to enter a good university and then to get a highly-
paid job”.
F. In addition, as such schools are usually expensive, not many children have a chance to get
there. This means that teachers can pay them more attention than at ordinary schools
and as a result, they are sure to get more knowledge.
Аргумент является нелогичным: сначала речь идет о том, что школы дорогие и не все
могут там обучаться. Далее следует предложение о том, что в результате учителя уде-
ляют им больше внимания. Кому? Тем, кто не может учиться в таких школах? Здесь
неверно построена фраза, что нарушает структурно-смысловые связи внутри абзаца.
Нужно было бы добавить промежуточное звено: As a result, there are not many
students at such schools, which means that teachers can pay them more attention…
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Exercise 5. What is your opinion about getting education at elite single-sex boarding
schools abroad? Plan and write your essay.
Many parents believe that it is not necessary to learn a second foreign language at school. It is
enough to learn only English.
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Exercise 1. Read the student’s essay. Analyse the content, organisation, vocabulary,
grammar and spelling? Correct the mistakes. Put a tick ( ) if the line is correct.
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(2) interpreters(sp)
(2) interpretors, so they don’t need two or three foreign don’t need to learn
languages (voc)
(3) due to the process
(3) and in our world is going globalization, so we don’t of globalization we
need don’t need to learn
(voc/gr)
(4) foreign languages at school because they’ll disapear (4) soon disappear
soon. (sp+gr)
(1) I can’t agree with them because students may have a (1) may (want to)
wish to
(2) change their
jobs(voc+gr), to do
(2) change their job in the future and others professions need other jobs one needs
(voc/gr)
(3) knowledge of three foreign languages. So, this student (3) a / some knowledge
may (gr) these / such
students (gr)
(4) have problems in the future. Moreover, globalization is (4,5) the process of
(5) increased in low speed, so humanity will have spoken globalization is going
foreign not very fast (gr+voc)
(6) languages for many centuries. (5,6) will speak, many
more (voc)
(1)To sum up, there’re many opinions on this theme, but (1)
mine is
(2) more convenient for me. (2) convincing (voc)
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As a result, such students may have problems in the future. Moreover, the process
of globalization is going not very fast, that is why humanity will speak foreign
languages for many more centuries.
Exercise 2. Plan and write an essay expressing an opposing opinion.
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… At school we are now doing a project on the most popular jobs among young people in the
USA. Could you tell me what jobs young people in Russia want to get? Why are they popular?
What career have you chosen, if any yet?
Last week I took part in a tennis tournament…
Moscow, Russia
14.05.2014
Dear Susan!
I was glad to receive your last letter. You asked me some questions, now I’ll answer them.
Many teenagers choose economics and law to study, as they want to become lawyers and
economists, because later they will earn a lot of money. As for me, I’d like to become a
technologist, so I’m going to study Chemistry.
By the way, who did you play with? Who won the game? What was the first prize?
That’s all. Write back.
Best wishes,
Polly
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Так как нужно всего минимум четыре слова, чтобы работу проверили, можно доба-
вить отсутствующую благодарность за полученное письмо: Thank you for your letter.
Затем, однако, придется изменить следующую фразу: I was glad to receive it again.
Можно также добавить фразу Sorry for not answering before: I was busy with my
project / exams, etc.
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Doing a part-time job while studying is a way to earn their pocket money for many teens.
However, most parents are sure that it would be better for them to concentrate
on their study.
Nowadays people can’t come to an agreement if to work or not to work when you study at
school. This is a question that worries a lot of teenagers and their parents nowadays.
There are a lot of different kinds of jobs that teenagers can do. And it won’t influence their life
because they do it part-time. Firstly, you can work at Mac Donald’s. In my opinion, it is one of
the most popular teenagers’ job. You can make fast food and work in a good team. They also
give you a different time to work. So, you can choose. Then, you get money, of course. Secondly,
you can be a waiter or a courier to bring different things to people. You learn to communicate
with people.
On the other hand, some people think that it is dangerous to be a courier. Because you can come
late and people can be angry. They even can fight you. As a result, you can lose your money
and health.
I don’t agree with them. To my mind, if you don’t want to be a courier, you can choose other
jobs. There are many of them. And if you are a courier, you can call back and they answer your
call, so you can say when you will come and it is not dangerous.
In conclusion I want to say that teenagers must work part-time because there
are many different jobs and they can be very useful.
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Exercise 2. Here are sentences from the 2nd paragraphs from the two jumbled essays.
Organise them so that they will match the students’ opinions.
Essay 1 Essay 2
Introduction Nowadays many teenagers are Most teenagers believe that
determined to work part-time in working part-time has a lot of
order to earn some pocket money. benefits. However, parents do
Others don’t think it is a good not often approve of it. Let us
idea. So, who is right? look into this question.
Paragraph 2 H, D, G, E, B A, F, C
Personally I agree with the There are some reasons why I
second point of view. There are a would like to work part-time.
few arguments that support my
opinion. First of all, working at First of all, thanks to this job
the expense of studying can lead teenagers will learn the value of
to losing an opportunity to enter money and hopefully will spend
college or university and then to it more wisely. What is more,
find a future job. That is why, while spending their own money
it is better to spend more time teenagers will get information
studying. Secondly, teenagers
will have enough work to do in about the cost of living. So,
the future. So, I suppose, that they will realize what kind of
they may use their chance to get education and a job to choose to
more pleasure from life and not earn enough money to provide
to work until they grow up. for their future families.
Exercise 3. Complete the essays. Write paragraphs 3, 4 and a conclusion in a logical way.
Возможное развитие темы:
Essay 1 Essay 2
Paragraph 3 Other people’ s opinion: Other people’s opinion:
However, my opponents say that However, other people may
working part-time also means say that working part-time
getting experience that can later while at school may have some
help to do a future job. Moreover, disadvantages. For example,
if a family has a low income, teenagers may not have enough
working part-time can help it. time to go to the cinema or
socialize with their friends.
Moreover, working part-time and
studying, young people often sleep
less which has a bad influence on
their health.
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Paragraph 4 Why I don’t agree with it: Why I don’t agree with it:
Not all the teenagers want to When a person has an aim
develop the career they start and many things to do, they
doing a part-time job. Many of organise their time better, so
them enter university and start they will be able to combine
doing something quite different. studying, working and having
a rest. What is more, teenagers
who don’t work part-time can
sleep little due to chatting in
social nets at night.
Conclusion Restating my opinion. Restating my opinion.
Many teenagers believe that it is more important to get a highly- paid job than a job that brings
satisfaction.
Exercise 1. Read the students’ arguments for the essay. What is NOT logical?
Comment on the arguments:
A. To my mind, people shouldn’t focus on money when choosing a job. Firstly, if one‘s job
brings them satisfaction, they will do it willingly and, as a result, get profit from it. For
example, one will never make oneself work extra hours if they hate their job.
B. Secondly, there is no doubt, that people spend a great amount of time at their working place.
So, they become grumpy, depressed and dissatisfied with their life.
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C. However, others believe that a future job should be chosen according to the amount of money
it brings. That is why they choose a job according to the amount of money it brings.
Здесь в качестве пояснения использован тезис аргумента: нужно выбирать работу ис-
ходя из количества денег, которые за нее платят, поэтому они выбирают работу, исходя
из количества денег, которые за нее платят.
Though I partly agree with them, I can’t fully accept this point of view. Unfortunately, many
very useful jobs nowadays are poorly-paid. Nevertheless, society can’t live without these
specialists. So, when choosing their jobs teenagers should think about this and give society
a possibility to help others.
Exercise 3. Brainstorm and develop arguments for and against different kinds of jobs.
Возможные варианты аргументов:
It gives an opportunity to provide for It makes a person feel that they are
one’s family. necessary.
It raises one’s status in a society. It offers many challenges for a person’s
It gives a chance to satisfy one’s needs development.
and wishes. It gives an opportunity to meet new
likely-minded friends.
Against a highly-paid job Against a job that brings satisfaction
It might be stressful (competition, high A person might have a very low salary
expectations from the managers). and not be able to provide for their
It might require working overtime. family.
It might influence a person’s character It brings stress: as a person will need
(people neglect their friends and family, to look for some other opportunities
become selfish, etc.). to earn money and as a result to work
It might make a person feel unhappy in over-time and neglect their family.
case they don’t like the job.
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Exercise 4. What’s your opinion about the problem? Plan and make notes
for an essay.
Возможный вариант развития темы:
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Exercise 1. Read paragraphs 3–5 from a student’s essay. Why will the student NOT
score maximum for the content and organisation?
However, some people feel that children should always follow their parents’ advice because they
are wiser than youngsters. They say that parents never do harm to their children, they want
only the best for them.
To my mind these facts are true but these people are not quite right. It is true that parents care
a lot about their children. However, in some cases even wise people are mistaken. In the modern
world teenagers should be allowed to choose their jobs because they are often up-to-date and
know how to become successful better than parents. So, parents can give them good advice.
To sum up, children should have the right to decide their future while parents may give them
some useful advice.
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Task1. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Charles
who writes:
… My class went on a one-day trip to Stratford-upon-Avon last week. I really enjoyed it. Do
you often go on school outings? Do you enjoy these trips? Why or why not? What was the most
interesting trip?
By the way, my grandfather was 75 last week and we had a family gathering…
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(10) few days. So my classmates have already been to (10) So, (p)
(11) Vladimir, Suzdal and Zvenigirod. What’s more, last (11)
(12) year the class went to Riga. According to what they (12)
(13) said, they really liked it very much. Although, the (13) However, the trip
trip to… (voc)
(14) to Zvenigorod bio station was the most interesting (14)
(15) and I liked it very much. I realy spend a great time (15) I really had a
great time there
(sp+ gr/voc)
(16) and got a lot of positive emotions. (16)
(17) Sorry, but I must go now. (17)
(18) Best wishes, (18)
(19) Ann (19)
Содержание:
В письме 126 слов
1. Ответ на вопрос, часто ли автор путешествует с классом, отсутствует: each year
my class organise some trips и далее про то, где были одноклассники.
2. Ответ на вопрос, нравятся ли автору эти путешествия и почему, отсутствует.
3. Ответ на вопрос, какое путешествие было наиболее интересным, дан: Although,
the trip to Zvenigorod bio station was the most interesting and I liked it very much.
I really spend a great time and got a lot of positive emotions.
4. Из трех заданных вопросов о дне рождения дедушки принимается только один:
How did you celebrate the B-day? Остальные вопросы не по теме.
5. Кроме того, отсутствует фраза-благодарность за полученное письмо и нет фра-
зы-надежды на последующие контакты.
Организация:
1. Адрес и дата под адресом в правом верхнем углу написаны верно.
2. Обращение, завершающая фраза, подпись автора написаны на отдельных стро-
ках.
3. Средства связи в основном использованы верно, однако неправильно употре-
блен союз "although" (должен быть "however").
4. Письмо написано логично. Автор разделил его на абзацы, хотя нарушил после-
довательность их изложения: сначала заданы три вопроса, а потом даны ответы на
вопросы друга. В принципе, при условии логичного изложения, такая последова-
тельность не вызовет понижения балла.
Языковое оформление
Имеется ряд ошибок (см. исправления).
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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and meet
national standards of behaviour.
(1) Travelling plays an important role in people life. Some (1) people’s lives (gr)
(2) people travel and follow the law and traditions of (2)
(3) countries. But some people don’t. However many (3) the countries (gr)
people Лучше предложе-
ние с "but" сделать
частью предыду-
щего (gr). После
"however" нужна
запятая
(4) consider that foreign countries should encouraged other (4) should
encourage (gr)
(5) different cultures. They travel to learn more about the (5)
(6) country. This is the question we need to resolve. (6) the question we
need to discuss (voc)
Комментарии:
Проблема сочинения: следует ли соблюдать традиции и обычаи страны, если ты на-
ходишься в ней в качестве путешественника. Но во вступлении учащийся
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(1) On the one hand, tourists who travel abroad should (1)
(2) respect the culture and the inhabitants who live in this (2) citizens / people
(voc)
(3) country. Another it will be difficult to seek mutual (3) otherwise
(voc), to find/
establish’(voc)
(4) understanding. As a result, people all over the world will (4)
(5) become more friendly and polite. In addition, people (5)
(6) visiting other countries are interested in learning more (6)
(7) facts about style of life and behaviour of local people in (7) the way
of life (gr+voc)
(8) this foreign country. In my opinion tourists should (8) in these foreign
follow countries (gr) in my
opinion, (sp)
(9) traditions and customs of the country which they visit. (9) the traditions
and customs (gr)
(10) While sightseeing people learn more about history of (10) the history of
the country (gr)
(11) the country they are in and wide their own experience. (11) broaden their
horizons (voc)
Комментарии:
1. Мнение автора должно быть написано в начале абзаца, однако оно стоит почти
в конце, что делает высказывание нелогичным. Последнее предложение не по теме.
2. Есть другие нарушения логики высказывания: будет трудно найти взаимопони-
мание, и в результате люди станут более дружелюбными и вежливыми.
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(1) But some people consider that, the host country should (1)
(2) welcome and encurage cultural differences as it is very (2) encourage’ ( sp)
(3) important being tolerant with your visitors and always (3) it is important to
be tolerant’ (gr)
(4) look friendly and hospitality. What is more, it is not (4) be friendly’ (voc),
hospitable (gr)
(5) possible to have only one common culture in the (5)
country.
(6) That is the reason why people should accept and tolirate (6) tolerate’ – в од-
ном случае написа-
но верно, в другом
– нет
(7) different traditions and customs. In addition, different (7)
(8) cultures mixing together, contribute to the (8) development (sp)
developement
(9) of a more sustainable society. (9)
Комментарии:
1. Есть аргумент, почему страны должны поощрять другие культуры: важно быть
толерантными. Но далее автор начинает развивать другую тему: почему в одной
стране не может быть только одной культуры. Таким образом, наблюдается отход от
темы сочинения.
2. С точки зрения «Организации» есть претензия к использованию союза "but"
в начале абзаца.
3. Имеется ряд ошибок.
(10) Though they are true, I don’t agree with these opinions. (10) Лучше было
бы сказать: "though
these people might
be right / their
opinions" (voc)
(11) Firstly, it is impossible to be tolerant with people who (11)
(12) break the rules and don’t follow the customes. That is (12) customs (sp)
(13) why people who don’t do this shouldn’t get offensive (13)
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(14) when somebody will speak about it and tell them that (14) when somebody
speaks about
it / tells them’ (gr)
(15) they are not right. Secondly, many different nations live (15)
(16) in different countries. (16)
Комментарии:
1. Контраргументы нелогичны: непонятно, почему автор говорит о людях, которые
нарушают правила и не соблюдают традиции. Возможно, нужно было сказать, что
бывают такие люди и поэтому трудно быть дружелюбным. Следующее предложе-
ние звучит как рекомендация, а не как аргумент (поэтому не стоит обижаться). На-
конец, последнее предложение не относится к теме, так как оно о том, что разные
национальности живут в разных странах. Данное предложение является нелогич-
ным.
2. Есть ряд ошибок.
Exercise 4. Read the conclusion that the student wrote. Analyse the content,
organisation, grammar, vocabulary and spelling. Correct the mistakes. Put a tick ( )
if the line is correct.
(1) In conclusion, both opinions are correct. Studying (1) В первом пред-
ложении лучше
написать’it is obvious
that both opinions are
correct’. (voc)
(2) and following other nations behaviour and culture (2) the other nations’
behaviour… ( gr)
(3) while visiting foreign countries is very important as (3)
(4) it helps to get life experience and make friends. (4)
(5) However, the host country should welcome other (5)
(6) traditions and customs too. If we will be friendly (6) If we are friendly
(gr)
(7) and polite, world will become better. (7) the world (gr)
Комментарии:
1. В заключении автор повторно не заявил о своем мнении, таким образом, оно
звучит как вывод для сочинения «за и против».
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Exercise 5. What is your opinion on the problem? Develop your arguments and make
notes for your essay following the plan.
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Exercise 2. Read the arguments from some essays. Which of them do you find the
most logical and convincing (put a tick V). Why?
A, B, E – наиболее логичные аргументы, хотя для аргумента В нужно добавить
какие-то примеры.
C – не является хорошим аргументом по данной теме, так как звучит больше деклара-
тивно, без объяснений, почему важно соблюдать традиции.
D – звучит несколько агрессивно. Кроме этого, наблюдается обобщение: не все моло-
дые люди могут так считать, поэтому аргумент спорный.
F – странный аргумент, иллюстрирующий непонимание автором сути соблюдения
традиций.
Exercise 3. Which of the opinions are you going to support? Develop your arguments
and make notes for your essay following the plan.
Возможный вариант развития темы:
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It is more important to travel when you are young than when you are a middle-aged person.
Active, they are gaining life They are busy working and
What is their experience. caring about their families.
way of life? They have little spare time,
they might be bored with life…
Most of young people depend They differ (some people might
What
on their parents or have just be well-off, while others can
opportunities
little money to travel on. be short of money), they can
for travelling
travel only on holidays, their
do they have?
holidays might be short.
They may have problems with
their health.
They learn about the world, see They have seen a lot, so they
What can places they have read about. need more impressions to get
they learn? To look for language exchange. surprised, which they can get
while travelling.
They can make friends from They enjoy every moment of
around the world. travelling.
They can learn to It is an opportunity to have a
communicate, have a lot of rest with their families.
What can action, do different activities It can satisfy different needs
they do? get more experience, make a and tastes: some people would
difference to the world. head for the museums and
To go to museums and art art galleries, while the others
galleries, to go shopping. would spend time and money
shopping.
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Exercise 4. Which of the opinions are you going to support? Read your arguments
and make notes for your essay following the plan.
Возможное развитие темы:
Paragraph 2 My opinion:
In my opinion, travelling is more important for young people.
1) They can learn to communicate and make friends from
around the world.
2) They can have a lot of action doing different activities and get
more experience.
Paragraph 3 Other people’s opinion:
Some people say that travelling is more important for people of
the older generation because:
1) It gives an opportunity to realize one’s dreams.
2) They have seen a lot, so they need more impressions to get
surprised, which they can get while travelling.
Paragraph 4 Why I don’t agree with it:
Though these people might be right, I don’t quite agree with
them because young people can also dream about seeing different
places, which they have read about and watched in the films, so
travelling for them is not less important than for their parents
and grandparents.
Paragraph 5 Conclusion: restating my opinion.
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You have received a letter from your English pen-friend Jason who writes:
We’re doing a project on modern technologies. Could you tell me what electronic devices are the
most popular in your country? How often do people use them? Do you agree that the best of all
is a mobile phone? Why or why not?
By the way, my friend from Italy is coming to us next week…
Exercise 1. Read the student’s letter. Analyse the content, organisation, grammar,
vocabulary and spelling. Put a tick ( ) if the line is correct.
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(7) divices and they are popular. People are using them (7) devices (sp),
people use them (gr),
(8) every day. But they take them to work and at home. I (8) they use them at
work and
at home (voc)
(9) don’t agree that the best of all is a mobile phone. I like it (9)
(10) too. I have new mobile phone and calling my friends (10) a new mobile
phone, call, (gr)
(11) and parents by it. (11)
(12) However, is you friend live in Italy? How old is he? (12) By the way/
Anyway, does your
friend live
in Italy? (voc, gr)
(13) Whats his name? (13) What’s his
name? (gr)
(14) Best wishes. (14) Write back
soon. (p)
(15) Write soon, (15) Best wishes, (p)
(16) Kirill. (16) Kirill (p)
Answer the following questions to analyse the letter:
1. Content:
1) How many words are there in the letter? 97
2) Have the following questions been answered?
• What electronic devices are popular in your country? NO
В письме нет ответа на этот вопрос, автор просто констатирует факт: We have many
electronic devices and they are popular.
• How often do people use them? YES
People use them every day.
• Is a mobile phone the best of them? Why or why not? YES/NO
Ответ есть, но неполный. Отсутствует вторая часть ответа: почему автор так считает.
3) Are there 3 questions about the friend from Italy? YES
Вопросы заданы, но первый вопрос не по теме: Does your friend live in Italy? Мы уже
знаем, что друг живет в Италии.
4) Have the rules of politeness been observed? YES
Автор поблагодарил за письмо, сослался на предыдущее, выразил надежду на после-
дующие контакты и написал завершающую фразу. Но завершающая фраза и надежда
на последующие контакты расставлены неверно: их нужно поменять местами.
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Now I’m going to answer your questions. There are a lot of popular electronic devices in Russia,
for example, computers, mobile phones and e-books. People use them every day at their work
and at home. I agree that the best of all is a mobile phone, because you can do a lot
of things with it. As for me, I have a new one and call my friends and parents by it.
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Nowadays many people think that exploring outer space is just useless. Others and I am among
them are interested in space and other planets. They read articles about space exploration and
other planets.
Проблема сочинения: следует или нет исследовать космос? Стоит ли это денег и вре-
мени? Однако автор не сумел ее правильно сформулировать. Есть попытка в первом
предложении, но дальше автор говорит о том, что он и другие люди интересуются
космосом и читают об этом статьи. Таким образом, он отходит от темы.
Write an introduction to the essay. Restate the statement in the task in different
words?
Возможные варианты использования другой лексики:
Space exploration: space research, to explore space
To be a waste of time and money: to be worthless spending time and money on it…
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Exercise 2. Read the second paragraph of the essay. Analyse the content,
organisation, vocabulary, grammar and spelling. Correct the mistakes using the lines
in the tables. Put a tick ( ) if the line is correct:
(1) On the one hand, scientists say about overpopulation (1) speak about(v)
on
(2) our planet. So, it’s a good solution in migrating to (2) migration to …is a
other good solution.(v)
(3) planets or space stations. Space research can help to (3)
do
(4) it. Secondly, the resources of our planet are now (4) the resources are
being exhausted. exhausting. (g)
(5) What the human kind shall do then? Space (5) What should
mankind
do then? (g, v)
(6) exploration can help to research other planets for (6) for mineral deposits
deposits. (v)
Content:
В абзаце нет мнения автора. Оно высказано во вступлении, но так как не касалось за-
трагиваемой проблемы, выражено нечетко. Поэтому второй абзац больше похож на
рассуждение о пользе исследования космоса.
Приведены два аргумента: первый – о возможности решить проблему перенаселения
планеты, второй – о возможности найти новые ресурсы.
Organisation:
В абзаце есть недочеты использования средств связи. Например, аргументы можно
было развить немного иначе:
Firstly, scientists speak about overpopulation on our planet. So, migration to other
planets or space stations could be a good solution to it, and space research could
help it.
Secondly, the resources on our planet are exhausting. So, what should mankind do? In
my opinion, researching space for mineral deposits is a good idea.
Exercise 3. Read paragraph 3 of the essay. Analyse the content, organisation,
vocabulary, grammar and spelling. Correct the mistakes. Put a tick ( ) if the line is
correct.
(1) However, the advocates of the opoising point of view (1) opposing (sp)
(2) beleive that we can’t explore other planets or space (2) believe (sp),
shouldn’t (gr)
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(3) becouse we can’t look for other resources. They say that (3) because(sp),
(4) people don’t want to migrate to other planets too. (4) too- в конце
предложения лиш-
нее. In addition, they
say that people don’t
want to migrate (v)
(5) Although, it is not humane to waste millions on space. (5) Also (v) , fair
(voc), millions of
dollars (voc)
Content:
В абзаце приведены мнения других людей, однако они повторяют аргументы автора
в пользу исследования, только зеркально наоборот. Таким образом, в сочинении нет
правильного развития аргументации.
Organisation:
Есть нарушение в использовании союза although в последнем предложении.
Есть нарушения в логике аргументации: мы не можем исследовать космос, потому что
мы не можем / не умеем искать полезные ископаемые. Это мнение ни на чем не осно-
вано.
Exercise 4. Develop arguments for and against space exploration.
Возможные идеи для развития темы:
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Exercise 5. Plan your essay. What opinion are you going to support? Complete the
following paragraph plan for your essay, making notes on what you are going to
include in each paragraph.
Many people think that the computer is one of the most useful inventions of the 20th century.
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Exercise 4. Why might some people think that the computer is not one of the
most useful inventions of the 20th century? Develop your arguments. Answer the
following questions.
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Exercise 3. Plan your essay. Complete the following paragraph plan for your essay,
making notes on what you are going to include in each paragraph.
Возможное развитие темы:
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Exercise 1. Write an introduction to an essay. Restate the idea in the task using some
other words.
Exercise 2. Develop arguments for the essay. Answer the questions below.
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Exercise 3. Plan your essay. What opinion are you going to support? Complete the
following paragraph plan for your essay, making notes on what you are going to
include in each paragraph.
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... Personally, I can’t understand people who have pets at home. They don’t look after them
properly. Do you have a pet? If yes, what kind of pet have you got? If not, would you like to
have one and why? Do you think that people do enough to help animals, why or why not?
By the way, my Dad has changed his job…
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(8) I think I wouldn’t like to have pet because my mum (8) a pet (gr),
don’t doesn’t
(9) likes them. (9) like
(10) Wow! Great news! What job your father had? Was he (10) What job did
your father have?
(11) travelling to his job? He liked it, isn’t it? (11) Did he travel
to his job? He liked
it, didn’t he?
(12) That’s all for now. I must to go now! (12) I must go now
(13) Keep in touch, (13) Keep in touch.
(p)
(14) Mag
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However, there are people who consider that genetic science is a positive way of development.
They think that genetic engineering, for example, is the key to solving the world’s famine
problems. I don’t agree with them, as the problems we сan face because of it are even more
frightening than the famine problems. Other people say that it’s just a medical procedure, so it
isn’t dangerous. However, this is a procedure at the molecular level, so it is
a very difficult operation.
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Content + organisation:
Данный абзац представляет собой неудачный пример приведения мнения других лю-
дей и попытку им возразить в одном абзаце вместо двух. Это серьезное отступление от
предложенного плана. Кроме того, есть претензии к качеству аргументов и контраргу-
ментов, а также логике построения высказывания.
Итак, мнение других людей: они за развитие науки о генах. В качестве аргумента автор
использует идею о решении с помощью науки проблемы голода во всем мире. Однако
контраргумент автора является неразвернутым: as the problems we сan face because of
it are even more frightening than the famine problems. Нет пояснения, с какими более
страшными проблемами могут столкнуться люди.
Второе мнение других людей про медицинскую процедуру непонятно. И, соответ-
ственно, возражение автора о том, что эта процедура на молекулярном уровне и по-
этому операция трудная, нельзя считать удачным контраргументом.
Exercise 3. Brainstorm some ideas you want to include in your essay. Use the
following vocabulary to help you.
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Exercise 4. Complete the table. Match the words from exercise 3 with the ideas
in the left column. Use the given vocabulary to develop counter-arguments to
complete the right part in the column.
Вариант использования лексики:
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Exercise 1. Write an introduction to an essay. Restate the question in the task using
some other words.
Animal testing: to experiment on living animals.
Should be banned: should not be allowed.
Introduction: students’ own answers.
Exercise 2. Answer the following questions and brainstorm the ideas for your
arguments. Use the following words to help you:
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Money: Why can such experiments be a waste of money? Why are they not always
accurate?
Возможно использование следующих данных. Однако следует предупредить уча-
щихся избегать т.н. blind statistics, когда цифры берутся «с потолка».
90 percent of medicines tested on animals fail on humans.
During the experiments animals are in an unusual environment, so they might feel
scared and stressed, therefore, the results will not be accurate. 9 out of 10 times, the
testing is found inaccurate in the end.
There is only a 5-25% chance of creating a cure that works for both animals and
people. Mice have a cure for cancer but humans don't have anything that will work
for sure.
There is concern that such products may be toxic or allergenic to certain
individuals.
Alternatives: What alternative technologies could be used instead?
We now have alternatives such as bio-engineering and computer modeling that can
provide us with better, more accurate results than animal testing. It's also a much
faster and cheaper method.
There are cheaper and less cruel methods to test medicine without hurting animals
or people, like micro-dosing or artificial skin.
Animals’ rights:
Animals also have the right to live, and the right to choose.
Animals have emotions. They have thoughts, ideas, feelings. They also suffer.
4) What is your attitude to this issue? Do you think that animal testing should be
allowed?
Students’ own answers.
Exercise 3. Plan your essay. What opinion are you going to support? Complete the
following paragraph plan for your essay, making notes on what you are going to
include in each paragraph.
Возможный вариант развития темы:
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Exercise 1. Write an introduction for an essay. Restate the idea in the task using some
other words.
Out of the house: take care of trees and plants around the houses, plant more;
keep the environment clean;
Other: take part in 3R projects (Reuse, Remake, Recycle) to both increase the
recycled products and decrease the new ones.
Be concerned: if every individual is aware of this issue, not only their house, but
the whole street, city or even the world can be much cleaner and better.
4) Why might some people think that making personal lifestyle changes will nev-
er save the environment?
Carbon emissions are increasing so quickly in developing countries that there is
nothing a person can do to prevent climate change.
Using energy-saving bulbs at home makes an insignificant difference compared to
that used by a factory.
They might think that all the problems could be solved only on a governmental
level. Nothing depends on their opinions or actions.
5) What is your opinion about the problem? How environmentally-friendly are
you?
• With these environmental ethics in mind, we should be able to do what we can
individually, for the results to have a bigger impact on the planet at large.
• As long as you do your part, and try to pass on that knowledge, the world is one
small step closer to being saved.
Exercise 3. Plan your essay. What opinion are you going to support?
Complete the following paragraph plan for your essay, making notes on what you
are going to include in each paragraph.
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Appendix 1
Appendix 1
Критерии оценивания выполнения задания 39
(максимум 6 баллов)
Решение Языковое
Организация
Баллы коммуникативной
текста
оформление
задачи текста
К1 К2 К3
2
Задание выполнено Высказывание логично; Используемый словарный
полностью: запас и грамматические
средства логической связи
структуры соответствуют
содержание отражает использованы правильно;
поставленной задаче;
все аспекты, указанные
текст верно разделен
в задании (даны полные орфографические
на абзацы;
ответы на все вопросы, и пунктуационные ошибки
заданы три вопроса по структурное оформление практически отсутствуют
указанной теме); текста соответствует (допускается не более
нормам, принятым в стране двух негрубых лексико-
стилевое оформление речи грамматических ошибок
изучаемого языка.
выбрано правильно или / и не более двух
с учетом цели высказывания негрубых орфографических
и адресата; и пунктуационных ошибок).
соблюдены литературные
нормы и правила этикета
межличностного общения
(используются вежливые
обращения и пр.).
1
Задание выполнено Высказывание Имеются лексические
не полностью: не всегда логично; и грамматические
ошибки, не затрудняющие
содержание отражает не имеются
понимания текста: имеются
все аспекты, указанные недостатки / ошибки
орфографические и
в задании (более одного в использовании средств
пунктуационные ошибки,
аспекта раскрыто не логической связи, их
не затрудняющие
полностью или один аспект выбор ограничен;
коммуникации (допускается
полностью отсутствует); не более четырех негрубых
деление текста на абзацы
встречаются нарушения нелогично / отсутствует; лексико-грамматических
стилевого оформления речи ошибок или / и не
имеются отдельные более четырех негрубых
или/и принятых
нарушения принятых орфографических
в языке правил общения.
норм оформления и пунктуационных ошибок.
личного письма.
0
Задание не выполнено: Отсутствует логика Понимание текста
в построении высказывания; затруднено из-за
содержание не отражает принятые нормы множества лексико-
тех аспектов, которые оформления личного грамматических ошибок.
указаны в задании письма не соблюдаются.
или / и не соответствует
требуемому объему.
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Appendix 2
Appendix 2
Критерии оценивания выполнения задания 40
(максимум 14 баллов)
Решение
Организация
Баллы коммуникативной
текста
задачи
К1 К2
3
Задание выполнено полностью: Высказывание логично;
• содержание отражает все структура текста соответствует
аспекты, указанные в задании; предложенному плану;
2
Задание выполнено: Высказывание в основном логично;
• некоторые аспекты, указанные имеются отдельные отклонения от
в задании, раскрыты не полностью; плана в структуре высказывания;
1
Задание выполнено Высказывание не всегда логично;
не полностью:
есть значительные отклонения
• содержание отражает не все от предложенного плана;
аспекты, указанные в задании; имеются многочисленные ошибки
• достаточно часто встречаются в использовании средств логической
связи, их выбор ограничен;
нарушения стилевого оформления
речи. деление текста на абзацы отсутствует.
0
Задание не выполнено: Отсутствует логика в построении
высказывания; предложенный
• содержание не отражает тех план ответа не соблюдается.
аспектов, которые указаны в зада-
нии, или / и не
соответствует требуемому объему,
или / и более 30% ответа имеют
непродуктивный характер (то есть
текстуально совпадают с опублико-
ванным источником).
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Appendix 2
Орфография
Баллы Лексика Грамматика
и пунктуация
К3 К4 К5
3
Используемый словарный Используются
запас соответствует грамматические
поставленной структуры в соответствии
коммуникативной задаче; с поставленной
коммуникативной задачей;
практически нет нарушений
в использовании лексики. практически отсутствуют
ошибки (допускается одна-
две негрубые ошибки).
2
Используемый словарный Имеется ряд Орфографические ошибки
запас соответствует грамматических ошибок, практически отсутствуют.
поставленной не затрудняющих
Текст разделен на
коммуникативной понимания текста (не
предложения с правильным
задаче, но встречаются более четырех).
пунктуационным
отдельные неточности
оформлением.
в употреблении слов (две-
три), либо словарный запас
ограничен,
но лексика использована
правильно.
1
Использован неоправданно Многочисленные ошибки Имеется ряд
ограниченный элементарного уровня либо орфографических
словарный запас; ошибки немногочисленны, или / пунктуационных
но затрудняют понимание ошибок, в том числе тех,
часто встречаются
текста (допускается шесть- которые незначительно
нарушения в
семь ошибок затрудняют понимание
использовании лексики,
в трех-четырех разделах текста (не более четырех).
некоторые из них могут
грамматики).
затруднять понимание
текста (не более четырех).
0
Крайне ограниченный Грамматические правила Правила орфографии
словарный запас не не соблюдаются, и пунктуации не
позволяет выполнить ошибки затрудняют соблюдаются.
поставленную задачу. понимание текста.
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